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Array ( [sid] => 46907 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => come back [time] => 2004-05-10 13:06:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => GOD im missing him plz tell him to return back to me
so that i must also b gay and happy

GOD U R the only one WHO knows how m i feeling
how he is ignoring me and teasing

But GOD still i want him to b mine
plz GOD soon bring that time

GOD i know he'll return back one day
and make me happy and gay

bcoz i bbelieve on U GOD ON U i have a firmbelief
and this thought gives me lot of relief

ill not ask him to return back ill ask U MY GOD
BCOZ U R THE SOVEREIGNand U can only combine us in knought

GOD im requesting U plz GOD i cant live happily without him
my life is so boring dull and dim

plz na GOD PLZ tell him to b mine plzzzz
GOD im already too much sad and teased

GOD i know U never ever return UR people without giving them
thats y im requesting U to tell him to return to my land

my love is waiting only 4 him i dont wna give it to any1 else
GOD plz when when he will return and his heart melts?

GOD i know this is not good but GOD wht shld i do?
i miss him so muchhhhhh GOD is he too?

GOD i know he does not bcoz he doesnt even look at me
without me he is too gay and happy

GOD y y im too emotional why cant i hide it
this is the reason y i cant cntrl my self even a bit

GOD im not good i know but plz GOD im sorry plz its not under my cntrl
i love him from the bottom of my heart and soul

GOD see UR creature is crying really GOD im crying
to cntrl my self im PROMISE trying

GOD nobody feels my sadness my grief for him
GOD see na my life is dim

GOD entire life is left how will i live my life??????
GOD im feeling thaat somebody broke my heart with a big knife

GOD im going now as im unable to cntrl myself
GOD plz tell him to love me and get out of himself [comments] => 2 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 2 [informant] => komal [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
come back

Contributed by komal on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 01:06:35 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



GOD im missing him plz tell him to return back to me
so that i must also b gay and happy

GOD U R the only one WHO knows how m i feeling
how he is ignoring me and teasing

But GOD still i want him to b mine
plz GOD soon bring that time

GOD i know he'll return back one day
and make me happy and gay

bcoz i bbelieve on U GOD ON U i have a firmbelief
and this thought gives me lot of relief

ill not ask him to return back ill ask U MY GOD
BCOZ U R THE SOVEREIGNand U can only combine us in knought

GOD im requesting U plz GOD i cant live happily without him
my life is so boring dull and dim

plz na GOD PLZ tell him to b mine plzzzz
GOD im already too much sad and teased

GOD i know U never ever return UR people without giving them
thats y im requesting U to tell him to return to my land

my love is waiting only 4 him i dont wna give it to any1 else
GOD plz when when he will return and his heart melts?

GOD i know this is not good but GOD wht shld i do?
i miss him so muchhhhhh GOD is he too?

GOD i know he does not bcoz he doesnt even look at me
without me he is too gay and happy

GOD y y im too emotional why cant i hide it
this is the reason y i cant cntrl my self even a bit

GOD im not good i know but plz GOD im sorry plz its not under my cntrl
i love him from the bottom of my heart and soul

GOD see UR creature is crying really GOD im crying
to cntrl my self im PROMISE trying

GOD nobody feels my sadness my grief for him
GOD see na my life is dim

GOD entire life is left how will i live my life??????
GOD im feeling thaat somebody broke my heart with a big knife

GOD im going now as im unable to cntrl myself
GOD plz tell him to love me and get out of himself




Copyright © komal ... [ 2004-05-10 13:06:35]
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Re: come back (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 01:17:00 PM AEST
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Wonderfully done! Hope you get what you want!


Re: come back (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 01:37:16 AM AEST
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your heart beat is heard in this poem.. very sweetly written.may your wish be fulfilled..
venkat




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