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Nominal love, callously born with hatred's utter scorn dedicated to life's unbirth.
Darkest angel mockingly demonstrative of heaven's perpetual might.
Embarking upon unholy crusade crucifying babes in inverted ceremony.

On gossamer strands life dangles hopeless to a reaver's searing blade.
Crimson saturated blade that parts life from bodies' haggard breath.
Salvation quickly abandoned weeping in his arms as throats are ghastly torn asunder.
Asphyxiated by own entrails to be abandoned at Dante's infernal gate.

A pregnant moon beholds destruction of old oak groves.
Yet, unborn children wrenched from mothers' tainted wombs.
Rampant decadence enslaves mans' mind tantalizingly enchanting their senses.
Insidious rapture spawned from twisting lovers' touches converted to venemous tongue.

Impetuous confessions to a demonic father endeavoring to cleanse sins at death's feet.
Flaying prayers' on bended knees in twilights' faltering glimmer, reaping pious souls.
Deliverance of the world spawned by genocide's tender embrace.
The righteous altered to blasphemous speech dreaming of pain's end in nightmarish existence. [comments] => 11 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Black13 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 31 [ratings] => 7 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Dark Angel

Contributed by Black13 on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 01:21:46 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Betrayed, betrothed in brothel's sinful cove birthed within Leviathan's belly.
Nominal love, callously born with hatred's utter scorn dedicated to life's unbirth.
Darkest angel mockingly demonstrative of heaven's perpetual might.
Embarking upon unholy crusade crucifying babes in inverted ceremony.

On gossamer strands life dangles hopeless to a reaver's searing blade.
Crimson saturated blade that parts life from bodies' haggard breath.
Salvation quickly abandoned weeping in his arms as throats are ghastly torn asunder.
Asphyxiated by own entrails to be abandoned at Dante's infernal gate.

A pregnant moon beholds destruction of old oak groves.
Yet, unborn children wrenched from mothers' tainted wombs.
Rampant decadence enslaves mans' mind tantalizingly enchanting their senses.
Insidious rapture spawned from twisting lovers' touches converted to venemous tongue.

Impetuous confessions to a demonic father endeavoring to cleanse sins at death's feet.
Flaying prayers' on bended knees in twilights' faltering glimmer, reaping pious souls.
Deliverance of the world spawned by genocide's tender embrace.
The righteous altered to blasphemous speech dreaming of pain's end in nightmarish existence.




Copyright © Black13 ... [ 2004-05-07 13:21:46]
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Re: Dark Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 01:29:06 PM AEST
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What a write. Guess you did get it all out. So much going on here. I think you are spewing at all of humanity more than at religion---all the things that are wrong with this fallen world. The next to last stanza is really intriguing. So much anger. Just wow. Dark. Really, really dark.
Stitch


Re: Dark Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 01:30:39 PM AEST
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WOW...
this is by far one of my favorites from you.
i cant express in words how good this write is and how much i loved it.
your use of words was outstanding.
a truely great write.
well done.

Arden


Re: Dark Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 01:53:08 PM AEST
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Gosh, Black, I hope you feel better. That piece is toxicity at its finest. Really great write.

Rita


Re: Dark Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 02:24:35 PM AEST
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amazingly done


Re: Dark Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 03:15:07 PM AEST
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WOW
Michelle


Re: Dark Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 04:38:39 PM AEST
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I love it... awesome job.


Re: Dark Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 06:20:42 PM AEST
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This is a chilling write and one I will read many times to appreciate its full effect.

A dark masterpiece
Very well done
Larry


Re: Dark Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 10:55:27 PM AEST
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Painfully beautiful...the emotions that are portrayed within your words are very strong... and the pain and suffering that is going on... wow...


Re: Dark Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 12:21:09 AM AEST
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I had to read it again and again to completely understand it and immerse myself in the emotions you placed in the poem. Amazing work. All I can to in stare at the monitor in awe. Brilliant piece.


Re: Dark Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 09:10:13 AM AEST
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amazing. i am completley speechless. this is such a gripping, emotional, angry dark write. i love it. i have to agree with arden. this is one of your best. brilliant..

*hugs* phil xx


Re: Dark Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by StoneAngel on Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 02:34:00 PM AEST
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wow, very emotional, it takes my breath away. Very Dark and you portraid humanity and whats going on in the world very well. This is how I see humanity I just couldn't put it in words. Thank you. Excellent write. I'd love to see more.




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