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[aid] => mick
[title] => No Words Can Explain How I Feel!
[time] => 2004-05-07 12:59:23
[hometext] => Another i wrote in my exam today, this one's about what happened yesterday. that women in CAMH's did my head right in!
[bodytext] => Noises in the street turned to echoes in my head.
I was feeling confused but had nothing to spill red.
I was getting frustrated as there was nothing I could do.
The clouds were coming over and it would be getting dark soon.
I had no money, no food, no where to stay.
I didn’t want to go home, or live another day.
I wanted to tell my mum I was sorry about all this.
But there was no contact and my head was full of mist.
I was being shredded in insanity, flamed by the shouts around.
I was scared someone would kidnap me and I’d never be found.
I couldn’t stay in those walls anymore.
I had to get out!
Her voice was scratching inside my head.
I blew and started to shout.
I walked straight out of that hospital!
Screaming inside my head!
There’s was nothing to keep me there anymore!
As my mind had just turned to lead…
Those coppers were really nice to me.
Though all I could do was cry.
I’d just broken right in half.
I can’t stay up right!!
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[ratings] => 3
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No Words Can Explain How I Feel!
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 12:59:23 PM in AEST
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Noises in the street turned to echoes in my head.
I was feeling confused but had nothing to spill red.
I was getting frustrated as there was nothing I could do.
The clouds were coming over and it would be getting dark soon.
I had no money, no food, no where to stay.
I didn’t want to go home, or live another day.
I wanted to tell my mum I was sorry about all this.
But there was no contact and my head was full of mist.
I was being shredded in insanity, flamed by the shouts around.
I was scared someone would kidnap me and I’d never be found.
I couldn’t stay in those walls anymore.
I had to get out!
Her voice was scratching inside my head.
I blew and started to shout.
I walked straight out of that hospital!
Screaming inside my head!
There’s was nothing to keep me there anymore!
As my mind had just turned to lead…
Those coppers were really nice to me.
Though all I could do was cry.
I’d just broken right in half.
I can’t stay up right!!
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2004-05-07 12:59:23]
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Re: No Words Can Explain How I Feel!
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 01:06:13 PM AEST
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| Great job! |
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Re: No Words Can Explain How I Feel!
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by poetrygodslove on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 01:11:07 PM AEST
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a powerful write... I want to reach out to you and give you a big hug and say, I love you , and im here for you ,if you ever need to talk. everyone needs to vent once in awhile. we all go through crap and wonder if its worth going on. been there and done that many times. but I get my mind on good things no matter how small they are. and get my mind on GOD and ask him to help me.
we get weak sometimes. but he is strong. good write. like your poetry. sandy |
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Re: No Words Can Explain How I Feel!
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by poetrygodslove on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 01:11:53 PM AEST
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| forgot to vote.. :) |
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Re: No Words Can Explain How I Feel!
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 01:20:16 PM AEST
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This is very sad to live in a state such as this. Life can be hard and cause emotional turmoil that can be self destructive. Trauma incidents can spur emotional triggers that can cause us to shut down or otherwise react in a manner not usual for our normal self. If you feel you do not need further medical help then please find a counselor somewhere and devote yourself to healing emotionally. If you have any question in your mind or heart that you do I personally would suggest finding medical help to get you through this before any further damage can be done. Sometimes physical ailments such as the brain shutting down the serotin production can cause this and require a simple pill for a while to spur it to start again and life will go back to your normal state of being. I am here if you need to talk. I will be glad to listen and help you through this. I have spent many hours of my life dealing with this. Help is there if you choose to accept it.
My very best to you,
Rita |
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Re: No Words Can Explain How I Feel!
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 01:28:45 PM AEST
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| if you need to talk let me know. im here for you. and i understand this. feel better soon my friend *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: No Words Can Explain How I Feel!
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by Black13 on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 01:52:51 PM AEST
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I like.
Excellent write.
It was good and powerful. |
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Re: No Words Can Explain How I Feel!
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 03:12:21 PM AEST
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Bless your heart Deathdrop,
I have worked with people like yourself for over 40 years.....and I can understand, believe I can. You have certainly created a marvelous poem showing just exactly what it's like to live inside your head. I commend you for that. I live in Wyoming and know some wonderful people you could go, but can't help you beyond that except please do go find a wonderful counselor.....look under Mental Health.......and if you are afraid they will commit you again, don't mention your past until you have built up trust. Then please know I'm here for you anytime of the day
I will even give you my telephone number, and I don't care when you call, day or night...you must reach out......and talk to someone to alleviate your fright.
1-307-220-0618
My name is Connie and if you can't get me at that number then please call 1-307-220-0622. This is Montie my son, and he will know where to find me OK?
I will call you right back so you don't have to pay for the phone number.
Please remember I love you, and will help in anyway I can.
Your poem was exceptional!
Warm Poetic Love,
Connie Sue |
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