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Array ( [sid] => 46197 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Childish Thoughts [time] => 2004-05-04 18:35:44 [hometext] => alright guys... back to the happy stuff... enjoy :) [bodytext] => I sit and watch a little girl staring at a tree
I wonder what she's doing there
Her mom has not been seen

I watch her stare into that tree
not knowing what she sees
I wish I was a little child
but then thats only me

Perhaps she sees a rainbow
Perhaps she sees the sun
Perhaps she see the little birds and that is giving her, her fun

Perhaps she sees an angel
Perhaps she''s looking at the sky
Perhaps there is a butterfly that just has fluttered by

I wonder what she''s doing there
I wonder what she sees
I wonder if its nothing more than a tree within the breeze.

She sits and looks some more I guess
I sit and watch her too
The little girl has brought me joy
and yet there is nothing she had to do....
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Childish Thoughts

Contributed by JennyFruFru on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 06:35:44 PM in AEST
Topic: ChildrensPoetry

I sit and watch a little girl staring at a tree
I wonder what she's doing there
Her mom has not been seen

I watch her stare into that tree
not knowing what she sees
I wish I was a little child
but then thats only me

Perhaps she sees a rainbow
Perhaps she sees the sun
Perhaps she see the little birds and that is giving her, her fun

Perhaps she sees an angel
Perhaps she''s looking at the sky
Perhaps there is a butterfly that just has fluttered by

I wonder what she''s doing there
I wonder what she sees
I wonder if its nothing more than a tree within the breeze.

She sits and looks some more I guess
I sit and watch her too
The little girl has brought me joy
and yet there is nothing she had to do....

Copyright © JennyFruFru ... [ 2004-05-04 18:35:44]
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Re: Childish Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 06:42:04 PM AEST
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hooray for the happy thoughts fantastic!

wildejohnny.

Re: Childish Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by voiceinthewilderness on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 06:42:32 PM AEST
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that's great, i really like it. Simple, but does it really need to be complicated to be meaningful? By no means.
Good job!

Re: Childish Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by TheSchroedmeister on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 06:44:14 PM AEST
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I loved it! Little things that bring us solace are always in reach, and you have described one. Thank you

Re: Childish Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 06:58:31 PM AEST
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Yeah, the real Jenni Fru Fru is back!!!!! It is about time. Enough living in the dark, o.k? lol
I love this. When I was a youngster we had these 300-400 year old oaks in our yard and they fascinated me. Their bark, their width, their height and the leaves and acorn and squirrels that lived there. I could play all day long in their shade and be perfectly contented. Gosh, I miss those times. Great poem, sweetpea.

Rita

Re: Childish Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 07:14:28 PM AEST
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Very good write.
Welcome back with the happy.
I really don't like the dark stuff but sometimes I read it jus 'cause it's your work.
More happy, please.
luv, hugss, happy,
emy

Re: Childish Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 07:42:37 PM AEST
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Little thiong that brighten our life. So many of them but we just don't look enough.
Take care,
David

Re: Childish Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 07:43:20 PM AEST
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This put a smile on my face. Very nice. :)

Re: Childish Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 07:49:53 PM AEST
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Awww, this was a cute write Jenny. It was adorable. *S* Cynthia

Re: Childish Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 09:47:58 PM AEST
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i like the sweat pea comment rita... thnx... i call everyone sweat pea and my kitten... so i think thats so cute... :) :) :) Sissy Sunshine and Sweat Pea... haha what a good combo :) :) :)

Re: Childish Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 10:28:14 PM AEST
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Now this was a gift to come home to, something so sweet that only one child could do. Thank you so very much. @};--

Re: Childish Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 12:47:06 AM AEST
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Adorable..happy write. venkat

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