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All feelings are dead
Starting to pull the trigger
Feeling of being to eager
Wanting to die
A poem to say goodbye
Letting you feel my hatred
Seeing how I have always bled
Sadness creeping in
My world about to end
BOOM!!!
Going to my doom... [comments] => 5 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 13 [informant] => TokenBad [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Gun

Contributed by TokenBad on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:20:01 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Gun to my head
All feelings are dead
Starting to pull the trigger
Feeling of being to eager
Wanting to die
A poem to say goodbye
Letting you feel my hatred
Seeing how I have always bled
Sadness creeping in
My world about to end
BOOM!!!
Going to my doom...

Copyright © TokenBad ... [ 2004-04-28 19:20:01]
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Re: Gun (User Rating: 1 )
by SuperAsh16 on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:26:25 PM AEST
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i love suicide poems. i wrote one too. your poem is great. keep up the good work.

Re: Gun (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:26:47 PM AEST
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creepily cool. I don't see the writing of this topic as being a bad thing provided it isn't a reality thing.
If this were mine, I'd switch the last two lines around...for effect! Thinking of the silence following such an act...........

Re: Gun (User Rating: 1 )
by blackmarker on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:56:59 PM AEST
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Awesome.. well done.
I write suicide poems too.. never written one with a gun before..
I agree, I'd change the last two lines for effect..
Great job!

Re: Gun (User Rating: 1 )
by sugar0986 on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 08:56:30 PM AEST
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Great Write! you can feel your emotion in this poem.

~Brittany~

Re: Gun (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:33:15 PM AEST
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I'm Sorry But Ya Know This May Have Been A Short Poem But When I Seen The Word Gun I Should Have Known Not To Read It....Sorry But My Best Friend Shot Her self Not To Long Ago With A Gun And This Brung Back Terrible Memories To Me....I Seen Her Lying Face Down In Her Own Home Blood Everywhere...Don't Get Me Wrong It Was A Nice Write But I Just Got All Emotional While Reading It...
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