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Array ( [sid] => 45257 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => War [time] => 2004-04-28 15:17:34 [hometext] => This poem is about my struggle with anorexia, although I have made it far I continue to struggle daily [bodytext] => Food
The mortal enemy
representing weakness and the
instability that dwells within
I begin the fight
For perfection
For control
Casualities will be taken
Mercy will not be shown

I become robotic
concerned only with the mission at hand
Friends are lost
Life deteriorates
The Battle rages on

Ana, my nuclear weapon
kills the enemy, the imperfections
I become Queen

I do not see the radiation falling over me
Ana won control but destroyed all
I reign over a starved, pathetic kingdom
no sign of life can be found
Ana showed no mercy

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Chappy246 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

War

Contributed by Chappy246 on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:17:34 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Food
The mortal enemy
representing weakness and the
instability that dwells within
I begin the fight
For perfection
For control
Casualities will be taken
Mercy will not be shown

I become robotic
concerned only with the mission at hand
Friends are lost
Life deteriorates
The Battle rages on

Ana, my nuclear weapon
kills the enemy, the imperfections
I become Queen

I do not see the radiation falling over me
Ana won control but destroyed all
I reign over a starved, pathetic kingdom
no sign of life can be found
Ana showed no mercy

Copyright © Chappy246 ... [ 2004-04-28 15:17:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: War (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:22:48 PM AEST
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wow.... I'm glad you've come far in your struggle.... I can't even think to say I know what you're going throug, but you have my support 100% (even if it may not mean too much, I mean, I don't really even know you.... but none the less, you have my full support, and will always....)
Just stay strong.
"Is there anything to hard for the Lord?"
"I can do all things through Christ, who strengthens me."
(don't know if you're Christian or not, but these verses help me when I'm thinking along those type of lines..... maybe you can find some inspiration....) ; )

Love,
Ellen

Re: War (User Rating: 1 )
by OMEGA_ on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:37:42 PM AEST
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good work
keep going

Re: War (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 04:27:07 PM AEST
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What a courageous person you are.
way to go and well done.

Re: War (User Rating: 1 )
by heart_breaker on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 05:32:01 PM AEST
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hey i just wanted to say that ur poem is
very inspiring and i congradulate u on ur sucess of getting over ur problem...keep it up
the lord is on ur side.

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