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Array ( [sid] => 45228 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Why It Rained Up. [time] => 2004-04-28 12:00:47 [hometext] => For Robby ^-^ [bodytext] => Under the blue-cheesecake sky,
With candy-glued stars, the clouds began to cry,
Twisting backwards, so up high,
And then...
It rained up.

The birds flew down,
And roots grew up,
Fish swam through the clouds,
But why the hell did it rain up?

And there goes my hair,
All the people fell into the air,
No one knows what tripped the trigger,
Or who itched their happy trigger finger,
Or how the hell it rained up.

But even though my bubblegum's been chewed,
I thought you knew that I knew you that you knew,
And I know...
That it was you.

How did I know that you made it rain up?
Because it was you that tipped my cup.
You kissed me soft and I flew so high...
You made my ground turn into my sky,
I fell for you with no where or why,
So it's because of you, that it rained into the sky... [comments] => 6 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 54 [informant] => ravenblack_phoenix [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => happypoetry )
Why It Rained Up.

Contributed by ravenblack_phoenix on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 12:00:47 PM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry



Under the blue-cheesecake sky,
With candy-glued stars, the clouds began to cry,
Twisting backwards, so up high,
And then...
It rained up.

The birds flew down,
And roots grew up,
Fish swam through the clouds,
But why the hell did it rain up?

And there goes my hair,
All the people fell into the air,
No one knows what tripped the trigger,
Or who itched their happy trigger finger,
Or how the hell it rained up.

But even though my bubblegum's been chewed,
I thought you knew that I knew you that you knew,
And I know...
That it was you.

How did I know that you made it rain up?
Because it was you that tipped my cup.
You kissed me soft and I flew so high...
You made my ground turn into my sky,
I fell for you with no where or why,
So it's because of you, that it rained into the sky...




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Re: Why It Rained Up. (User Rating: 1 )
by Black13 on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 12:15:34 PM AEST
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This one is different in a very good way.
I think the style is very fitting to you.
Very nicely done.


Re: Why It Rained Up. (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 12:17:37 PM AEST
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Congratulations on a very vivid piece of work. I think that love does give the impression that all it opposite as what it normaly would be.
Thanks for a happy poem.

bernard.


Re: Why It Rained Up. (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 12:31:21 PM AEST
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You wrote this beautifully.


Re: Why It Rained Up. (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 12:55:36 PM AEST
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oh i love this! brilliantly exquisite as is all your poetry, you are truely a beautiful writer; i wish you'd post more often:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Why It Rained Up. (User Rating: 1 )
by sugar0986 on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:53:47 PM AEST
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I love this poem, its so cute.

~Brittany~


Re: Why It Rained Up. (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 03:46:15 PM AEST
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Good poem, even with the swear words.




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