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Array ( [sid] => 45180 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => this is how i feel tonight [time] => 2004-04-28 00:53:33 [hometext] => don't take things so literaly [bodytext] => I have no will to be here anymore.
This feeling hit as i watched you walk out the door.
you screamed "we're done" at the top of your lungs.
I went to the bedroom and grabed my gun.
not to use on you, thats something you know i would never do.
realize i'm goin to hell as i get the the dusty box of shells.
i run to the cabnet to get a big chug of wiskey, thats when istart to wonder if she will even miss me.
when i put 1 round in the chamber, i understand that i can't blame her.
she never asked to marry a boozer,
here i sit a lonley drunk loser.
i put the barrel just behind my ear,
i am so releived that the end is near.
when the bullet came out,
i never even heard her shout.
her lips read i love you,
as the back of my head blew...
this is just an attempt to vent. This poem is crap, but i feel better already [comments] => 3 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 13 [informant] => bigmatt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

this is how i feel tonight

Contributed by bigmatt on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 12:53:33 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I have no will to be here anymore.
This feeling hit as i watched you walk out the door.
you screamed "we're done" at the top of your lungs.
I went to the bedroom and grabed my gun.
not to use on you, thats something you know i would never do.
realize i'm goin to hell as i get the the dusty box of shells.
i run to the cabnet to get a big chug of wiskey, thats when istart to wonder if she will even miss me.
when i put 1 round in the chamber, i understand that i can't blame her.
she never asked to marry a boozer,
here i sit a lonley drunk loser.
i put the barrel just behind my ear,
i am so releived that the end is near.
when the bullet came out,
i never even heard her shout.
her lips read i love you,
as the back of my head blew...
this is just an attempt to vent. This poem is crap, but i feel better already

Copyright © bigmatt ... [ 2004-04-28 00:53:33]
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Re: this is how i feel tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:16:24 AM AEST
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Please take it easy on yourself. this is written well. Very good writing and great venting too.
Hang tuff.
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
emy

Re: this is how i feel tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:29:24 AM AEST
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good venting... :)

Re: this is how i feel tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by HOPE4ME2 on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 01:02:22 AM AEST
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Truly powerful writing, loaded with emotion, it took great courage to be real in your feelings, sure would not want this to be more than venting.

Blessings
HOPE4ME2

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