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[aid] => mick
[title] => never been so stupid
[time] => 2002-10-01 09:15:00
[hometext] => whatever...
[bodytext] => i wish i could let you know how i feel
instead of being so freaking passive
and submissive
i want to make sure you remember who
you've hurt
i want to imbed my name inside your eyelids
so when you go to sleep at night
or it's her you're holding tight
you can remember who you've driven
to the knife
and when you want to toss senseless words
my way
i'll make sure it's you who's gonna pay
you're just another high school jerk
i'll get over what you said someday.
[comments] => 7
[counter] => 276
[topic] => 6
[informant] => Blue
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 5
[ratings] => 1
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => AngryPoetry
)
never been so stupid
Contributed by
Blue
on
Tuesday, 1st October 2002 @ 09:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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i wish i could let you know how i feel
instead of being so freaking passive
and submissive
i want to make sure you remember who
you've hurt
i want to imbed my name inside your eyelids
so when you go to sleep at night
or it's her you're holding tight
you can remember who you've driven
to the knife
and when you want to toss senseless words
my way
i'll make sure it's you who's gonna pay
you're just another high school jerk
i'll get over what you said someday.
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Blue
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2002-10-01 09:15:00]
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Re: never been so stupid
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by Mud on
Tuesday, 1st October 2002 @ 02:29:42 PM AEST
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| I totally understand what you're saying here. I've felt this sort of anger. really good write. I like it a lot. |
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Re: never been so stupid
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th October 2002 @ 11:05:17 AM AEST
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I really feel this poem. Recently (today) a girl i care about went through this. Very good stuff.....Keep writing!
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Re: never been so stupid
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by Rage on
Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 01:58:25 AM AEST
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Just like all your other poems, I like this one, too. Tsk, girl, who's been making your day feel like $#!+?!??? You know I'll do somethin' about it! Tsk, and besides, sweetie, they just have nothing better in their life to do, but to put someone down to make THEMSELVES feel good. Keep your head up!
Happier Dayz,
~*~RAGE~*~ |
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Re: never been so stupid
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by Knowledge on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 09:08:55 AM AEST
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It is feelings like this that make people kill themselves. And they are also the ones that make people hurt others.
Making him understand what he did to you is very important, but you must remember that for whatever reason he did this to you, he may have an an argument that may be as good as yours. I don't know exactly what the situation is, but don't cause him more trouble than he needs. I find that that is a problem with broken hearts these days. I know some people that have broken up with someone because they lost interest. It is not their fault, but the other person, the one that got dumped, still blames them. They still give the other person ***** about it.
Whatever happened between you two, I hope it is resolved one day. I for one, have seen too much pain. Unfortunately, I am going to see much more.
-Knowledge |
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Re: never been so stupid
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by Knowledge on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 09:09:05 AM AEST
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Re: never been so stupid
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by Knowledge on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 09:10:40 AM AEST
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Oh my god... I don't know what is up with these darn replies I send, but half of them don't even work! ROFL! Ok...I'll get to the point...
It is feelings like this that make people kill themselves. And they are also the ones that make people hurt others.
Making him understand what he did to you is very important, but you must remember that for whatever reason he did this to you, he may have an an argument that may be as good as yours. I don't know exactly what the situation is, but don't cause him more trouble than he needs. I find that that is a problem with broken hearts these days. I know some people that have broken up with someone because they lost interest. It is not their fault, but the other person, the one that got dumped, still blames them. They still give the other person ***** about it.
Whatever happened between you two, I hope it is resolved one day. I for one, have seen too much pain. Unfortunately, I am going to see much more.
-Knowledge |
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Re: never been so stupid
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by cryingonmyporch on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 12:55:07 PM AEST
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obviosly knowledge needs more KNOWLEDGE anyways I loved your poem and don't mind what other guys think! In the long run they all end up hurting someone.
Stay happy!
And remember to smile
Amy |
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