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Array ( [sid] => 44825 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sunset [time] => 2004-04-25 21:51:59 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Squeeze harder this is the end
Do it faster they know where you’ve been
Years are gone she was blind
Squeeze harder it’s your time to shine

Pull it back remember when
Remember her eyes her shaking chin
It falls apart so perfectly
Pull it back and set it free

Let the chamber burn one more round
Let yourself collapse to the ground
It’s all slow motion you can see it there
In the middle of nothing burning through the air
Your dreams are gone

Squeeze harder now’s when it hurts
Breathe deep say hello to your last words
Feel the veins open in your skin
Squeeze harder and do it again

Again and again and again

Let the chamber burn one more round
Let the shell fall far to the ground
It’s all slow motion you can see it there
In the middle of nothing burning through the air
Your dreams are gone

Again and again and again [comments] => 3 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 34 [informant] => paper-heart-hero [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Sunset

Contributed by paper-heart-hero on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 09:51:59 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Squeeze harder this is the end
Do it faster they know where you’ve been
Years are gone she was blind
Squeeze harder it’s your time to shine

Pull it back remember when
Remember her eyes her shaking chin
It falls apart so perfectly
Pull it back and set it free

Let the chamber burn one more round
Let yourself collapse to the ground
It’s all slow motion you can see it there
In the middle of nothing burning through the air
Your dreams are gone

Squeeze harder now’s when it hurts
Breathe deep say hello to your last words
Feel the veins open in your skin
Squeeze harder and do it again

Again and again and again

Let the chamber burn one more round
Let the shell fall far to the ground
It’s all slow motion you can see it there
In the middle of nothing burning through the air
Your dreams are gone

Again and again and again

Copyright © paper-heart-hero ... [ 2004-04-25 21:51:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Sunset (User Rating: 1 )
by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:11:44 PM AEST
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Again and again and again... I love it! Wonderful write. Amazing write. All around a masterpiece, of a masterful minds. :) Sunsets will never be so sweet from here on out.
xslashxprettyxskinx

Re: Sunset (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 07:26:40 AM AEST
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I hope you don't really feel like this.

Sad write but nicely written.

Re: Sunset (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:02:20 PM AEST
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pull it back and set it free.........profound.......

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