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Array ( [sid] => 44801 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A love’s Farewell [time] => 2004-04-25 18:32:40 [hometext] => a lost love!!!...aaww... [bodytext] => The love we had, I knew was so good,
We laughed, talked just how a good couple should.
We shared a first kiss, a first love so sweet,
I knew from then on no man would ever beat,
A love like yours.

You had me in the clouds,
Drunken, high from your love.
You couldn’t make me any more proud,
Your last name fit me like a glove!
At least that’s what I thought.

Maybe you felt a different way,
You weren’t ready to be real.
Maybe you weren’t able for love’s price to pay
I guess that’s how you feel
You hurt me.

If you felt like this all along,
How come you never said so?
Had me listening to a love song,
I thought that’s how our love would go.
You said farewell.

Made me never want to love again,
I have been hurt for a lifetime.
Don’t want a man, don’t want a friend,
Just want you just to be mine.
But you broke my heart, said farewell.
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A love’s Farewell

Contributed by MellaSwtASHonee on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 06:32:40 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



The love we had, I knew was so good,
We laughed, talked just how a good couple should.
We shared a first kiss, a first love so sweet,
I knew from then on no man would ever beat,
A love like yours.

You had me in the clouds,
Drunken, high from your love.
You couldn’t make me any more proud,
Your last name fit me like a glove!
At least that’s what I thought.

Maybe you felt a different way,
You weren’t ready to be real.
Maybe you weren’t able for love’s price to pay
I guess that’s how you feel
You hurt me.

If you felt like this all along,
How come you never said so?
Had me listening to a love song,
I thought that’s how our love would go.
You said farewell.

Made me never want to love again,
I have been hurt for a lifetime.
Don’t want a man, don’t want a friend,
Just want you just to be mine.
But you broke my heart, said farewell.




Copyright © MellaSwtASHonee ... [ 2004-04-25 18:32:40]
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Re: A love’s Farewell (User Rating: 1 )
by xoblondiebabix3 on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 07:10:04 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this very much.. its quite sad.. :( I can relate to this poem with acertain guy and i can relate it with myself a little bit...
Good write! :~)
~*xObeaOx*~


Re: A love’s Farewell (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 07:43:59 PM AEST
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I wonder why women love and men only need? I have questioned that for years. Is there one man that truly knows what real love is? I keep trying but somewhere deep inside me there is a feeling that love is just a myth, perpetuated to keep us on the hook. I keep biting, it keeps being jerked away. Maybe one day I will learn. Shame because actually I am an intelligent educated woman, just not in love apparently.

Rita




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