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Your beautiful eyes, the longest I can look now
Without you watching
This is the closest I can come to you now
Your heart, so many barriers formed around
I could have loved you forever, my darling
I could have loved you for my whole life

One touch makes me shiver inside
Every kiss from you just reminds me how to die
One word and I just break down and cry

And oh, you are so perfect
My love…so perfect

And broken hearts can be never be replaced
They will never be the same, my love

And…oh…I was so in love with you
So many parts of your heart I knew
Trust so sacred…and I could have loved you for eternity
I could have loved forever, my darling
I could have loved you for my whole life

And please, just take it all
Don’t leave me with my memories
It’s too painful to look at you
And just remember all we used to have

And oh, you are so beautiful

Please, my love, my angel, my perfect
My one and only, please
Just go
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perfect

Contributed by wyrd_faerie on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 01:06:32 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I sit with this stained photograph
Your beautiful eyes, the longest I can look now
Without you watching
This is the closest I can come to you now
Your heart, so many barriers formed around
I could have loved you forever, my darling
I could have loved you for my whole life

One touch makes me shiver inside
Every kiss from you just reminds me how to die
One word and I just break down and cry

And oh, you are so perfect
My love…so perfect

And broken hearts can be never be replaced
They will never be the same, my love

And…oh…I was so in love with you
So many parts of your heart I knew
Trust so sacred…and I could have loved you for eternity
I could have loved forever, my darling
I could have loved you for my whole life

And please, just take it all
Don’t leave me with my memories
It’s too painful to look at you
And just remember all we used to have

And oh, you are so beautiful

Please, my love, my angel, my perfect
My one and only, please
Just go

Copyright © wyrd_faerie ... [ 2004-04-23 13:06:32]
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Re: perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 01:11:52 PM AEST
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beautiful poem Lucie I don't know what to say this is just so sad. I'm awestruck at the beauty in your words.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 02:16:40 PM AEST
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This was sad and resonated with very deep feelings. It really touched my heart.

Kie

Re: perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 02:30:37 PM AEST
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aww, this is so sad, and so beautiful. there is so much emotion here, i can feel it. stay strong. *hugs* phil xxx

Re: perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by youlied on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:13:46 PM AEST
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Wow, this is....amazing. Great poem.

Re: perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:50:35 PM AEST
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your heart and soul and pain poured from this heartbreaking write almost had me in tears.
michelle

Re: perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by Black13 on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 05:31:09 PM AEST
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What else can I say other than "Wow"?
This was incredible and I've felt that way.
This was very well constructed and executed.
Awesome write.

Re: perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 05:35:12 PM AEST
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ohhh lucie, this is so beautifully heartfelt!! i do hope emily reads this, surely she will be moved, i hope everything works out soon.... big hugs n' love you, nessa

@->>->-

Re: perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by amalyna on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:09:49 PM AEST
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very touching....I could really feel the message in your words. i've been there before and reading this brought me right back there. very nice write.

Re: perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by M on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 07:14:20 AM AEST
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Oh Lucie. I miss you so much it hurts. You are the most perfect person in my life, and i don't know how to live without you here besides me. You were my air, my earth, my soul, and to think that i may have lost you forever tears me apart. I know words are of little effect at the moment, but even if you only read it: I love you.
xXx

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