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Array ( [sid] => 43990 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This Fire [time] => 2004-04-20 01:12:21 [hometext] => I wrote this to someone I knew only for two weeks, but loved nonetheless. [bodytext] => The chill in the air
So much harder to bear
There's nowhere I can hide
The silence it screams
So much louder it seems
Without you by my side
I want you to know
We only can grow
From the time we have to share
I want you to see
It's not easy for me
To get up the courage to care
But when you're beside me
I know I can't hide me
I open my heart to you
If this fire should burn
I can't ask in return
But I promise my heart to be true
Love has its surmises
Life's full of suprises
We must learn to seize the day
Though there's pain to endure
A chance taken's worth more
Than the one let slip away [comments] => 3 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 55 [informant] => amalyna [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

This Fire

Contributed by amalyna on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:12:21 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

The chill in the air
So much harder to bear
There's nowhere I can hide
The silence it screams
So much louder it seems
Without you by my side
I want you to know
We only can grow
From the time we have to share
I want you to see
It's not easy for me
To get up the courage to care
But when you're beside me
I know I can't hide me
I open my heart to you
If this fire should burn
I can't ask in return
But I promise my heart to be true
Love has its surmises
Life's full of suprises
We must learn to seize the day
Though there's pain to endure
A chance taken's worth more
Than the one let slip away

Copyright © amalyna ... [ 2004-04-20 01:12:21]
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Re: This Fire (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:47:06 AM AEST
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Good write and wonderful lesson! Great job you have a great talent here keep up the good work!

Re: This Fire (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 04:17:40 AM AEST
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Very good write and I luv that last line.
It's all in the attitude one has and I luv your attitude.
luv, huggs, take a chance,
emy

Re: This Fire (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 04:48:52 AM AEST
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well written, chances are good............ nothing ventured, nothing gained? hugs n' love nessa

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