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Array ( [sid] => 43734 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => falling in love with you [time] => 2004-04-18 10:18:42 [hometext] => [bodytext] => when i was in your arms
it felt unreal
it made me think
am i really here
it was unbeilivable
i could've stayed there forever
but falling asleep with you
man,that was even better
my head lying on your lap
your arms around me
you would wrap them tighter
pulling me closer
your other hand my mine
brushing it lightly
it felt so right
i loved you so much that night
still, aas i do now
now and all my days
believe me, this is not just a phase
i have fallen in love with you
really it's true
i never thought
i would've fallen, just like that
it all happened so fast
who would've thought
that it would be you
but hey, what else is new?
all i want is to be with you
because now that i've met you
i'm empty without you
if i could have one wish
that would be it
for you to be mine
and for you to love me
now, and for all eternity [comments] => 4 [counter] => 239 [topic] => 2 [informant] => shortchics_rock_07 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

falling in love with you

Contributed by shortchics_rock_07 on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:18:42 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

when i was in your arms
it felt unreal
it made me think
am i really here
it was unbeilivable
i could've stayed there forever
but falling asleep with you
man,that was even better
my head lying on your lap
your arms around me
you would wrap them tighter
pulling me closer
your other hand my mine
brushing it lightly
it felt so right
i loved you so much that night
still, aas i do now
now and all my days
believe me, this is not just a phase
i have fallen in love with you
really it's true
i never thought
i would've fallen, just like that
it all happened so fast
who would've thought
that it would be you
but hey, what else is new?
all i want is to be with you
because now that i've met you
i'm empty without you
if i could have one wish
that would be it
for you to be mine
and for you to love me
now, and for all eternity

Copyright © shortchics_rock_07 ... [ 2004-04-18 10:18:42]
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Re: falling in love with you (User Rating: 1 )
by luckymacie on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:46:26 AM AEST
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that is so sweet i realy liked it exspcialy the part were you say
"but falling asleep with you
man,that was even better
my head lying on your lap
your arms around me
you would wrap them tighter
pulling me closer
your other hand my mine
brushing it lightly"
i remember doint that with my ex boyfrirnd and your right it dose feel right like thats were your ment to be is with him

Re: falling in love with you (User Rating: 1 )
by luckymacie on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:46:55 AM AEST
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that is so sweet i realy liked it exspcialy the part were you say
"but falling asleep with you
man,that was even better
my head lying on your lap
your arms around me
you would wrap them tighter
pulling me closer
your other hand my mine
brushing it lightly"
i remember doing that with my ex boyfrirnd and your right it dose feel right like thats were your ment to be is with hem

Re: falling in love with you (User Rating: 1 )
by hearmyvoice on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 11:56:10 AM AEST
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This is really sweet and well said. It's nice to hear a poem from someone who really is in love.

Re: falling in love with you (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 11:44:13 PM AEST
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YOU HAVE SOME STRONG FEELS HOW OLD ARE YOU?

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