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Array ( [sid] => 4353 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If You See Her [time] => 2002-09-27 16:45:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => If you see her,
Tell her not to worry or hurry by,
If we should meet on any street or bus;
I won’t make a fuss or scene or try
To do anything unseemly;
And if she asks how I have been,
Tell her you saw me in the rain,
So you don’t know if I'm in pain,
If I had tears or raindrops on my cheeks;
And if she speaks of her new love,
Tell her I'm far above that kind of thing,
Oh! And by the way, that ring she gave
I have it still but do not wear it,
And do not care, if she wants, ill send it;
And let’s not pretend it matters a bit;
It never really did fit, anyway;
And you don’t know if I cry at night,
Or why I haven’t been around too much;
Use a subtle touch, keep it light;
Tell her maybe I have new friends,
And when one thing ends another begins;
No one loses no one wins;
And maybe I wouldn’t want her back,
Or lack for comfort or sit alone,
And die inside and hide and hide
How lost I feel or how unreal
Each day now seems. Tell her this,
If she should ask: which she won’t;
But just in case.

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If You See Her

Contributed by melis on Friday, 27th September 2002 @ 04:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

If you see her,
Tell her not to worry or hurry by,
If we should meet on any street or bus;
I won’t make a fuss or scene or try
To do anything unseemly;
And if she asks how I have been,
Tell her you saw me in the rain,
So you don’t know if I'm in pain,
If I had tears or raindrops on my cheeks;
And if she speaks of her new love,
Tell her I'm far above that kind of thing,
Oh! And by the way, that ring she gave
I have it still but do not wear it,
And do not care, if she wants, ill send it;
And let’s not pretend it matters a bit;
It never really did fit, anyway;
And you don’t know if I cry at night,
Or why I haven’t been around too much;
Use a subtle touch, keep it light;
Tell her maybe I have new friends,
And when one thing ends another begins;
No one loses no one wins;
And maybe I wouldn’t want her back,
Or lack for comfort or sit alone,
And die inside and hide and hide
How lost I feel or how unreal
Each day now seems. Tell her this,
If she should ask: which she won’t;
But just in case.

Copyright Â© melis ... [ 2002-09-27 16:45:00]
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Re: If You See Her (User Rating: 1 )
by aernby on Friday, 27th September 2002 @ 11:37:26 PM AEST
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been there

your poetry evokes emotions in me i wish it didn't . . .

good write

aern +

Re: If You See Her (User Rating: 1 )
by chatabox on Saturday, 28th September 2002 @ 04:32:37 AM AEST
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oh drat, this is too sad. Love so hurts doesnt it. Dont punish yourself, try and move on.

Great WRITE.

Re: If You See Her (User Rating: 1 )
by MisterRight on Saturday, 28th September 2002 @ 06:41:49 AM AEST
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Wow, as if I was depressed enough already. That was really sad. A excellent write, but really sad. I think I'm gonna go have a nice cry now...

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