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Obscure the night
A lonely star
Is smothered
Without a trace

The sunshine
A meaningless word
The moonlight
Slipped with my memories
Of you

The raindrops
Oust my blind tears
The dark road
Devours my future

It's me, alone
Hid in the shadows
My hands reach out
For the dawn [comments] => 10 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Hurretje [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Blind Night

Contributed by Hurretje on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 02:39:24 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

All dark clouds
Obscure the night
A lonely star
Is smothered
Without a trace

The sunshine
A meaningless word
The moonlight
Slipped with my memories
Of you

The raindrops
Oust my blind tears
The dark road
Devours my future

It's me, alone
Hid in the shadows
My hands reach out
For the dawn

Copyright © Hurretje ... [ 2004-04-16 02:39:24]
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Re: Blind Night (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 03:51:29 AM AEST
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simply beautiful..when ever I walk in moonlit nights I must search for you in shadows.well wrapped. venkat

Re: Blind Night (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 04:15:48 AM AEST
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Sad but yet beautifull.
luv, huggs, dawn,
emy

Re: Blind Night (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 04:16:54 AM AEST
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very very moving bittersweet poem, well woven words:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: Blind Night (User Rating: 1 )
by reilt on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 04:42:51 AM AEST
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sad but so beautiful...fantastic write...well done

Re: Blind Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 06:30:07 AM AEST
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Such a sad write, but a beautiful one. *S* Cynthia

Re: Blind Night (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 10:11:48 AM AEST
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this is beyond beautiful and so very sad.
this was written so well, just amazing talent you have. well done keep it up.
Arden

Re: Blind Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 11:13:28 AM AEST
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bittersweet, beautiful and a write I can relate to all too well.
Beautifully written
Larry

Re: Blind Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Thivanka on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 09:57:04 AM AEST
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Short and sweet. Nice one.
-Thivanka

Re: Blind Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 01:58:56 AM AEST
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It's me, alone
Hid in the shadows
My hands reach out
For the dawn

This verse summed the whole poem up and rounded it off nicely i liked the idea of hands reaching out for the dawn, like looking for a new beginning.

wildej.

Re: Blind Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd September 2010 @ 04:51:03 AM AEST
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nice poem.. i like it.. keep writing..

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