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Array ( [sid] => 43402 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tortured Bliss [time] => 2004-04-15 17:37:08 [hometext] => Nothing ever lasts, but it always hurts [bodytext] => Swept of my feet.............
Flush in my cheeks
........Colours all hazed
Feelings all blurred
A warmth does swarm...........
Chills do sweep
The perfect site...........Take the picture

It tastes so sweet.......
makes me feel weak
.......Caught in a daze
My words all slurred
A posion formed...........
Sinking in deep
The stolen fight.............Take the picture

Strength of a fleet..........
Pleasure you seek
..........Your power pays
You speak the word
To me your torn...........
Tortured my sleep
The missing light.......Take the picture

You stole my heart...........
Threw it away
.........For I will fall
Into your bliss
No need to care...........
Do it again
For one last kiss........Take the picture
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Tortured Bliss

Contributed by fallen_eyes on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 05:37:08 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Swept of my feet.............
Flush in my cheeks
........Colours all hazed
Feelings all blurred
A warmth does swarm...........
Chills do sweep
The perfect site...........Take the picture

It tastes so sweet.......
makes me feel weak
.......Caught in a daze
My words all slurred
A posion formed...........
Sinking in deep
The stolen fight.............Take the picture

Strength of a fleet..........
Pleasure you seek
..........Your power pays
You speak the word
To me your torn...........
Tortured my sleep
The missing light.......Take the picture

You stole my heart...........
Threw it away
.........For I will fall
Into your bliss
No need to care...........
Do it again
For one last kiss........Take the picture

Copyright © fallen_eyes ... [ 2004-04-15 17:37:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Tortured Bliss (User Rating: 1 )
by reilt on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 05:51:22 PM AEST
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really liked this poem...the repition is very effective...well done

Re: Tortured Bliss (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 06:02:44 PM AEST
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Wow.. picks jaw up off foor...
Tammy this is amazing
i love the rhythm and style, the way the reader gets caught up in your emotions durng the second stanza and how the vivid imagery at the start is replaced by the underlying cold and harsh truth within your words, though the vivid imagery is kept and held strong throughout the entire piece

Beautiful, capitvating, involving and somewhat relatable in an odd way
A joy to read from start to finish

Luke xxxxxx

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