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Array ( [sid] => 43399 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => How I feel [time] => 2004-04-15 17:16:49 [hometext] => Extended & Revised [bodytext] => Where do I hide?
Behind the shadows,
Away from all my pride?
In the dark that swallows
& leaves me hollow

Why do I find?
All my sorrow
Outside hanging on the line?
Where I'm so shallow

How does it feel,
To know how I feel?
You're always telling me
What's better for me
When you can't even
Heal yourself.

How does it feel?
Tell me! how should I feel?
Tell me, how I feel.

Where is my the shed?
So cozie and warm
Swimming in my head
With the comfort of worms
Feeding so slow
Eating to know
All of my soul.

Why do I find?
My blanket is gone
Where did you go?
Into The flames and back to the ground?
Away from me, leaving me alone.

What can I say?
I couldn't save us from ourselves.
This is how I feel.
Now, this is how I feel.

You went away, leaving me alone
That's how I feel

When, (in song)

"All my friends are dead and gone
Left me here all alone
All I know is this song
Can't you see I'm getting old"

I lament with a hit of the bong
I lament , drink a beer
Try to forget they're gone
But my memories here
Got me wrong.

So again (I break into song)

"Remember the days
We took the sun
and shoved her into the the skies
Remember those days
of clouds
purple, pink, & grey
remember those days(x3)
so long ago
Out on an Atlantic coast
Eating mushrooms, beans,
And Jennifer Green
Remember the days
Of leisure and play
Remember those days
On the Gulf coast
Tripping like Timothy Leary
Remember those days so well
Oh well, oh well,
They're gone,
I'm gone"

This is how I feel
Can you feel what I feel?
Do you know?
Did you see?
Or are you just one to tell
Cause you can't be
So honest and free?

Oh well, oh well
It's okay
This isn't yours
This is mine
My hell
So, well

It's okay,
We're all fine
It's just a little mask
For the Bardo

It' just a little time
I barrowd


[comments] => 2 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 62 [informant] => rhei76 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => spiritual )
How I feel

Contributed by rhei76 on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 05:16:49 PM in AEST
Topic: spiritual



Where do I hide?
Behind the shadows,
Away from all my pride?
In the dark that swallows
& leaves me hollow

Why do I find?
All my sorrow
Outside hanging on the line?
Where I'm so shallow

How does it feel,
To know how I feel?
You're always telling me
What's better for me
When you can't even
Heal yourself.

How does it feel?
Tell me! how should I feel?
Tell me, how I feel.

Where is my the shed?
So cozie and warm
Swimming in my head
With the comfort of worms
Feeding so slow
Eating to know
All of my soul.

Why do I find?
My blanket is gone
Where did you go?
Into The flames and back to the ground?
Away from me, leaving me alone.

What can I say?
I couldn't save us from ourselves.
This is how I feel.
Now, this is how I feel.

You went away, leaving me alone
That's how I feel

When, (in song)

"All my friends are dead and gone
Left me here all alone
All I know is this song
Can't you see I'm getting old"

I lament with a hit of the bong
I lament , drink a beer
Try to forget they're gone
But my memories here
Got me wrong.

So again (I break into song)

"Remember the days
We took the sun
and shoved her into the the skies
Remember those days
of clouds
purple, pink, & grey
remember those days(x3)
so long ago
Out on an Atlantic coast
Eating mushrooms, beans,
And Jennifer Green
Remember the days
Of leisure and play
Remember those days
On the Gulf coast
Tripping like Timothy Leary
Remember those days so well
Oh well, oh well,
They're gone,
I'm gone"

This is how I feel
Can you feel what I feel?
Do you know?
Did you see?
Or are you just one to tell
Cause you can't be
So honest and free?

Oh well, oh well
It's okay
This isn't yours
This is mine
My hell
So, well

It's okay,
We're all fine
It's just a little mask
For the Bardo

It' just a little time
I barrowd






Copyright © rhei76 ... [ 2004-04-15 17:16:49]
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Re: How I feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 06:11:22 PM AEST
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well this is interesting... i'd say there's lots of feeling in here, but that would probably sound stupid at this point! good write, even if extended and revised! ;0)
~Remy~


Re: How I feel (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 03:41:03 PM AEST
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i won't tell you that you can write........you should know that..........but man can you convey emotions........your intelligence......your class.....it ain't borrowed.....it's you!!!!!




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