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Array ( [sid] => 43092 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => loved ones, friends, irony. jason and terry [time] => 2004-04-13 18:53:33 [hometext] => this is a reply to lonely_kakashi. with thanks to our friends jason and terry. all i can say is now im closer to the pair of them. as for lonely_kakashi we have settled our differences finally after a year has passed. enjoy!!! [bodytext] =>
All I have to give is friendship.
I can no longer give my lips.
We grew in separate ways.
Too many frays.
This was your decision
So may it be your lesson.

You say I’m love struck.
But lets face it I’m dumbstruck
I have grown but not changed.
We have become estranged.
Taken two of your ‘friends’ to get us in contact.
What we have certainly lacked.
These two friends also mine.
Now isn’t that an ironic line.

Neither of us close to these two friends.
Yet they helped us make amends.
Months passed by,
By luck should I bump into one of them.
If I hadn’t would I be writing this poem?

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 43 [informant] => little_genna [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

loved ones, friends, irony. jason and terry

Contributed by little_genna on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 06:53:33 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

All I have to give is friendship.
I can no longer give my lips.
We grew in separate ways.
Too many frays.
This was your decision
So may it be your lesson.

You say I’m love struck.
But lets face it I’m dumbstruck
I have grown but not changed.
We have become estranged.
Taken two of your ‘friends’ to get us in contact.
What we have certainly lacked.
These two friends also mine.
Now isn’t that an ironic line.

Neither of us close to these two friends.
Yet they helped us make amends.
Months passed by,
By luck should I bump into one of them.
If I hadn’t would I be writing this poem?

Copyright © little_genna ... [ 2004-04-13 18:53:33]
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Re: loved ones, friends, irony. jason and terry (User Rating: 1 )
by reilt on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 07:48:57 PM AEST
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i really like the ending...great poem...

Re: loved ones, friends, irony. jason and terry (User Rating: 1 )
by Chade on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 11:06:19 AM AEST
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cool poem, glad your now in contact with each other :)

Chade

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