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Array ( [sid] => 42853 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I was only 12... [time] => 2004-04-12 07:56:29 [hometext] => This is something that happened to me. 2 years ago on the 16th, or 17th of this month. what hurts me more is that my sister said that she only hit me, that she never made me bleed. people said i was lieing. even though i had to see a doctor about it... [bodytext] => Her love is dead,
flat and spread.
she's hit me hard,
round the back of my head.
its left me crying,
on my bed.
i'm still scared she's comming,
to hit me again!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Morning comes,
shadows don't go,
there's dried blood on my head,
i lie, in my bed, froze.
i face life.
she iggnors me, when she see's me,

i feel so inloved.

i just wanted her to love me...

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 32 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

I was only 12...

Contributed by deathdrop on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 07:56:29 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Her love is dead,
flat and spread.
she's hit me hard,
round the back of my head.
its left me crying,
on my bed.
i'm still scared she's comming,
to hit me again!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Morning comes,
shadows don't go,
there's dried blood on my head,
i lie, in my bed, froze.
i face life.
she iggnors me, when she see's me,

i feel so inloved.

i just wanted her to love me...

Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-04-12 07:56:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I was only 12... (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 08:03:03 AM AEST
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A very sad tragidy, worse still that it was done by your own flesh and blood.
My heart goes out to you, I hope time has helped heal your heart.

Take Care
Kindredblood dragon

Re: I was only 12... (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 08:25:32 AM AEST
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Hey. This Is Sad.

Re: I was only 12... (User Rating: 1 )
by luckycharm on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:01:17 PM AEST
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That is so deep and sad. Why would someone do that to you?. You are a very good writer, keep up the good work.-luckycharm.

Re: I was only 12... (User Rating: 1 )
by Thumper0719 on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 06:45:39 PM AEST
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Oh my god that is so sad. I cant beliave your own sister did that too you. Well I really do hope time has helped you heal. Your really good.

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