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Let you inside my mind, deep inside my head
Ask me what you want, I'll answer if I can
Don't be afraid, I'm not a madman

Ask what makes me tick, I'll tell you it's a clock
Alarm bells ringing in my head, thoughts running amok
Ask me what I see, what I visualise
Pretty painted pictures, totally painted lies

What about my life, what do you want to know
Where I have come from, where do I want to go
I came from the cesspit, of lost souls and death
Here I'll belong, until my dying breath

About all the murders, why you may ask
A pastime so enjoyable, a worthwhile task
The voices just said, get out there and kill
Now you've been in my mind, did it give you a thrill

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Ask Me

Contributed by parkman on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 04:29:26 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I'll spend some time with you, lying on your bed
Let you inside my mind, deep inside my head
Ask me what you want, I'll answer if I can
Don't be afraid, I'm not a madman

Ask what makes me tick, I'll tell you it's a clock
Alarm bells ringing in my head, thoughts running amok
Ask me what I see, what I visualise
Pretty painted pictures, totally painted lies

What about my life, what do you want to know
Where I have come from, where do I want to go
I came from the cesspit, of lost souls and death
Here I'll belong, until my dying breath

About all the murders, why you may ask
A pastime so enjoyable, a worthwhile task
The voices just said, get out there and kill
Now you've been in my mind, did it give you a thrill

Copyright © parkman ... [ 2004-04-11 04:29:26]
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Re: Ask Me (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 06:13:31 AM AEST
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Chilling write, hmm sounds like my head, lol

Excellent poem

Silent

Re: Ask Me (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 06:15:00 AM AEST
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wow thats excellent. a littel dark but its incredibly good.

love and hugs
XgenX

Re: Ask Me (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:37:26 AM AEST
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wow.. this is amazing..
charlotte x_x_x

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