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Like my whole body, my whole soul, my whole WORLD is screaming.
How can you make me feel like this?
Like I want to fall to the floor and die laughing.
How can you make me feel like this?
Like black is not dark enough and blood is the only thing that's red.
How can you make me feel like this?
Like I want to tear your eyes out but kiss you while I'm doing it.
How can you make me feel like this?
Like YOU'RE the only thing that matters.
How can you make me feel like this?
Like I'd see you dead but then I'd want to die with you.
How can you make me feel like this?
Like I want to EXPLODE!
How can you make me feel like this?
How DARE you make me feel like this? [comments] => 5 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Wolfareen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

How can you make me feel like this?

Contributed by Wolfareen on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:23:55 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

How can you make me feel like this?
Like my whole body, my whole soul, my whole WORLD is screaming.
How can you make me feel like this?
Like I want to fall to the floor and die laughing.
How can you make me feel like this?
Like black is not dark enough and blood is the only thing that's red.
How can you make me feel like this?
Like I want to tear your eyes out but kiss you while I'm doing it.
How can you make me feel like this?
Like YOU'RE the only thing that matters.
How can you make me feel like this?
Like I'd see you dead but then I'd want to die with you.
How can you make me feel like this?
Like I want to EXPLODE!
How can you make me feel like this?
How DARE you make me feel like this?

Copyright © Wolfareen ... [ 2004-04-07 17:23:55]
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Re: How can you make me feel like this? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:51:08 PM AEST
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Yep... a rollercoaster indeed.
Well done, I enjoyed the ride.

Re: How can you make me feel like this? (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:51:44 PM AEST
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have had that sort of relationship long ago...ran far far away from it
you have describe so many bad relationships and the pain involved

Shari

Re: How can you make me feel like this? (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 06:28:12 PM AEST
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This Poem Brung Back Alot Of Bad Memories
In My Past Relationships.... So Much Pain Involved In This Write....
Good Write Though......
,,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Re: How can you make me feel like this? (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 06:21:43 PM AEST
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reminds me of a previous relationship that i am now glad to be out of... very confusing, and very true, good write. *hugs* phil xxx

Re: How can you make me feel like this? (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 07:26:55 AM AEST
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Yep- in total agreement. He makes me feel this way too (a joke, a joke- I couldn't resist).

Okay, seriously, a raw and completely identifiable diatribe against the hold that certain very attractive people seem to have over us.Why do we keep re-visiting this emotional hell? because it is such a delicious blend of feelings that make you feel so alive, so intense, as your poem so forcefully details.

Not that I've visited this place recently, but thanks for reminding me ......

Spike

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