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Array ( [sid] => 42198 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Why Did You Start? [time] => 2004-04-07 16:36:31 [hometext] => I lost it really badly in real life over a year ago. this is only some of what she did! i felt like this, and though things are calmer now, i still can't let go! [bodytext] => You make me mad!
because i can't, find the answers!
i feel so small,
you're an intruding b*****d!

you numb me down,
because i can't cope!
you're taking, you're advantage!
draining my hope!

you keep on itching,
even though you've reached, you're goal.
you just play rounds with my mind,
until i loose control!

then out shoots my anger,
in a sharp flow,
pulling away more happiness,
letting my dark-side show!

life is bitter,
it was obvisous, things would collide!
and now i feel so rotten,
all i want to do now is DIE!

only, i know i won't.
because no one wants to hear of another death!
and my grave will just be gobbed on!
and i only half, want to give in yet...

I DON'T WANT TO DIE,
but i'm still sore.
life really sucks,
it's so immature! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 6 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Why Did You Start?

Contributed by deathdrop on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 04:36:31 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You make me mad!
because i can't, find the answers!
i feel so small,
you're an intruding b*****d!

you numb me down,
because i can't cope!
you're taking, you're advantage!
draining my hope!

you keep on itching,
even though you've reached, you're goal.
you just play rounds with my mind,
until i loose control!

then out shoots my anger,
in a sharp flow,
pulling away more happiness,
letting my dark-side show!

life is bitter,
it was obvisous, things would collide!
and now i feel so rotten,
all i want to do now is DIE!

only, i know i won't.
because no one wants to hear of another death!
and my grave will just be gobbed on!
and i only half, want to give in yet...

I DON'T WANT TO DIE,
but i'm still sore.
life really sucks,
it's so immature!

Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-04-07 16:36:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Why Did You Start? (User Rating: 1 )
by Justalady on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:20:22 PM AEST
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Anger give way to exceptance in time. Writing helps cool the mind. There will always be another time and perhaps better than before. Hang in. Written straight from the heart. Justalady

Re: Why Did You Start? (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:33:28 AM AEST
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Lot Of Anger In This Write....It Is Best If You Let It Out......Good Write....
******LoVe**AnGeL*******
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