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Array ( [sid] => 42060 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Someone Else's Suicide [time] => 2004-04-06 19:13:46 [hometext] => I found out one of my friends is suicidal today. I'm freaked out, and this is what came out of me. Tell me what I should do... [bodytext] => Emotions that I’ve felt before,
now belong to someone else.
All the pain and torture,
I see in someone else’s eyes.
They shouldn’t have to feel this!
I was already there!
I go through the same pain,
but from two perspectives.
It’s hard to give advice
on a situation I’m experiencing.
I still am suicidal,
yet telling someone,
“There is hope!”
I’m experiencing the fear
of losing someone that I know,
and see how much fright and sleep
I am causing others.
Damn my worthless body!
Damn this hurtful nothingness
that they call living!
I don’t want to do this!
I’m finished with this game!
But the team won’t let me quit!
But all I want is to escape!
But I must keep my head strong and high,
so that I may be looked up to.
I feel like
I’m a hypocrite,
indeed that’s what I am.
But is it wrong to save someone
from experiencing my fate? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 36 [informant] => WorthlesSanity666 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Someone Else's Suicide

Contributed by WorthlesSanity666 on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 07:13:46 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Emotions that I’ve felt before,
now belong to someone else.
All the pain and torture,
I see in someone else’s eyes.
They shouldn’t have to feel this!
I was already there!
I go through the same pain,
but from two perspectives.
It’s hard to give advice
on a situation I’m experiencing.
I still am suicidal,
yet telling someone,
“There is hope!”
I’m experiencing the fear
of losing someone that I know,
and see how much fright and sleep
I am causing others.
Damn my worthless body!
Damn this hurtful nothingness
that they call living!
I don’t want to do this!
I’m finished with this game!
But the team won’t let me quit!
But all I want is to escape!
But I must keep my head strong and high,
so that I may be looked up to.
I feel like
I’m a hypocrite,
indeed that’s what I am.
But is it wrong to save someone
from experiencing my fate?




Copyright © WorthlesSanity666 ... [ 2004-04-06 19:13:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Someone Else's Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by face-in-the-crowd on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 07:58:24 PM AEST
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All I have to say to you is that prayer can do more than anything. Think about that. Just keep the faith and whatever happens it will all turn out how God wanted it to be. I'll contribute some prayers also!


Re: Someone Else's Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 01:59:55 AM AEST
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I just lost a friend to suicide and its awful! I cant give advice because I dont understand it I have to force myself to move on and whether I agree or not he made his decission gallons of tears wont bring him back now.
michelle


Re: Someone Else's Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by TwEeK on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 07:51:19 PM AEST
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youmust be very confused..i feel sorry for you.....i've felt that way befour.....seeing my friends like that.....seeing my boyfriend like that.......that was long ago......
I liked the way you refered life as a game, like soccer!!! that was a very cool smart perspective!!!!
nice poem
tWeEkY




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