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As your pleading with yourself
To make a better judgment call
If you’d think with your heart
And not your mind
You’d see I’m there all the while
Catching you as you fall
My thoughts are taking over
And drown out your “help me” calls
Why do I abandon myself?
Leaving everything unconquered
And deserting you while you’re in need
So consumed in the grieving memory
Of leaving you, all alone to die
A burden that weighs down my soul
Can’t think of where to start
Cause everything’s been screwed up
No one cares or remembers why we are here
I’m petrified of him deserting me
Left isolated with all these tears
So tell me what I’d like to hear
And keep a border around your heart
That averts you from my harm
You’ve got your life so planned out
That there’s not any time for you to live
So tell yourself it’ll be alright
When you are all you’ve got
It sure makes the memories see to fade
I’m still here, watching you from worlds away
Knowing our lives will never interchange

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Emortal

Contributed by Fairy on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 03:18:14 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I see you in my visions
As your pleading with yourself
To make a better judgment call
If you’d think with your heart
And not your mind
You’d see I’m there all the while
Catching you as you fall
My thoughts are taking over
And drown out your “help me” calls
Why do I abandon myself?
Leaving everything unconquered
And deserting you while you’re in need
So consumed in the grieving memory
Of leaving you, all alone to die
A burden that weighs down my soul
Can’t think of where to start
Cause everything’s been screwed up
No one cares or remembers why we are here
I’m petrified of him deserting me
Left isolated with all these tears
So tell me what I’d like to hear
And keep a border around your heart
That averts you from my harm
You’ve got your life so planned out
That there’s not any time for you to live
So tell yourself it’ll be alright
When you are all you’ve got
It sure makes the memories see to fade
I’m still here, watching you from worlds away
Knowing our lives will never interchange

Copyright Â© Fairy ... [ 2004-04-06 15:18:14]
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Re: Emortal (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 03:25:41 PM AEST
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this is so beautiful and sad. so well written. impressive write. well done.
Arden

Re: Emortal (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 04:08:29 PM AEST
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wow. Expertly written, and very real...

Re: Emortal (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 04:21:41 PM AEST
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This was so good. It resonates truth in others lives. I liked this alot.
Very sad... Very powerful though.

Re: Emortal (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 07:23:55 PM AEST
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Reality can be a sad thing. You did an excellent job expressing your feelings in this poem... Kie

Re: Emortal (User Rating: 1 )
by Tiffyo4 on Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 04:51:45 PM AEST
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very nice write

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