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Array ( [sid] => 42015 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love trial [time] => 2004-04-06 13:10:16 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I gather myself and stand up for the trial.
Ridding myself of both hope and denial.
Cross-examinating the feelings inside me,
the love that I feel, how strong can it be?

That I love you is beyond any reasonable doubt,
but I still have to wonder what I'm thinking about.
I've felt the strongest emotion that I can recall,
but the time that I've known you is not long at all.

It may be a long time until we meet again.
When that day arrives, will I still feel this pain?
Can this be the punishment from above,
for the crime I've committed, for falling in love?

You are the judge and the jury of all.
I am at trial, standing there small,
awaiting to hear the sentence on me.
I cling to my lawyer, how harsh can it be? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 22 [informant] => gothicangel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Love trial

Contributed by gothicangel on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:10:16 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I gather myself and stand up for the trial.
Ridding myself of both hope and denial.
Cross-examinating the feelings inside me,
the love that I feel, how strong can it be?

That I love you is beyond any reasonable doubt,
but I still have to wonder what I'm thinking about.
I've felt the strongest emotion that I can recall,
but the time that I've known you is not long at all.

It may be a long time until we meet again.
When that day arrives, will I still feel this pain?
Can this be the punishment from above,
for the crime I've committed, for falling in love?

You are the judge and the jury of all.
I am at trial, standing there small,
awaiting to hear the sentence on me.
I cling to my lawyer, how harsh can it be?

Copyright © gothicangel ... [ 2004-04-06 13:10:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Love trial (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:14:18 PM AEST
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this is so well written very well done.

wildejohnny.

Re: Love trial (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:33:09 PM AEST
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i agree so well written and just amazing. love the flow very smooth. great work.
Arden

Re: Love trial (User Rating: 1 )
by tiny_mo on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:46:16 PM AEST
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That was a splened poem. Truely inspiring and emotional. I love it. Good Job!!!

Re: Love trial (User Rating: 1 )
by swiftsouljah on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 05:58:45 PM AEST
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vivid images i think i went to this same "court" it was a mistrial... it sucks... anyways great poem

wayne

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