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Array ( [sid] => 41915 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => in the mirror [time] => 2004-04-05 19:42:14 [hometext] => plz comment on this poem i wrote it for my baby before i lost her [bodytext] => I look up
as a tear rolls slowly
down my cheek
I think about better days
and wonder if I'll feel that way again I look at myself in the mirror
into my eyes I know so well
how serious this is, so deep and insightful
as know am not in control anymore
but i would like to
i would like to wait 4 you to come later
but i cant wait no more you are aready here
Now i am so scared
like for once i don't have the answer
I gaze in the mirror
looking deep into my eyes
Hoping to understand to find a answer of any kind
why did u half to come so early why coundnt you wait
I wonder for a moment
if this is all a dream
if I shall wake in the morning
and be relieved
i look at me
with a confusment I have never seen
slowly i wipe the tears from my cheek
wounding what i have done this problem is not just mine but yours
so i think and hope i can fix it all and to give youthe best i can because u will be soon and 4 ever be mommys lil girl or boy

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 21 [informant] => jmt25607 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
in the mirror

Contributed by jmt25607 on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 07:42:14 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



I look up
as a tear rolls slowly
down my cheek
I think about better days
and wonder if I'll feel that way again I look at myself in the mirror
into my eyes I know so well
how serious this is, so deep and insightful
as know am not in control anymore
but i would like to
i would like to wait 4 you to come later
but i cant wait no more you are aready here
Now i am so scared
like for once i don't have the answer
I gaze in the mirror
looking deep into my eyes
Hoping to understand to find a answer of any kind
why did u half to come so early why coundnt you wait
I wonder for a moment
if this is all a dream
if I shall wake in the morning
and be relieved
i look at me
with a confusment I have never seen
slowly i wipe the tears from my cheek
wounding what i have done this problem is not just mine but yours
so i think and hope i can fix it all and to give youthe best i can because u will be soon and 4 ever be mommys lil girl or boy





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Re: in the mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 08:44:05 PM AEST
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*Sigh*..... so heartfelt..I am sorry for your loss... I know writing about it helps....
Jenni


Re: in the mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 08:50:33 PM AEST
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Tragic...you put your feeling into words very well. I too am sorry for your loss.

Roses
Larry




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