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Array ( [sid] => 41151 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love Forever? [time] => 2004-03-31 15:44:32 [hometext] => Just questions and thoughts... love sure raises alot of those. [bodytext] => Love, yes love
Has a sweet call
Though often enough
Makes fools of us all

Can any man
Comprehend love?
Or can it only be answered
By God above?

A little bit
Of love I see
That precious sight
Overpowers me

If the tip of the iceberg
Is all I behold
How can I say
What will unfold?

"Forever I'll love you"
Is easy to say
But what if destiny
Didn't plan it that way?

My love forever
You say you will be
But what of the changes
Today we don't see?

We can't know for sure
What will happen tomorrow
What if today
Our love ends in sorrow?

But often enough
Our fears are unfounded
And things that were said
Weren't meant as they sounded

Words spoken in haste
By wrath overpowered
Weren't rational thoughts
Spoken in love's awesome power

Don't be too hasty
In making a vow
But if the promise is made
Keep it, somehow [comments] => 9 [counter] => 246 [topic] => 21 [informant] => wachumiri [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 40 [ratings] => 9 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Love Forever?

Contributed by wachumiri on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 03:44:32 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Love, yes love
Has a sweet call
Though often enough
Makes fools of us all

Can any man
Comprehend love?
Or can it only be answered
By God above?

A little bit
Of love I see
That precious sight
Overpowers me

If the tip of the iceberg
Is all I behold
How can I say
What will unfold?

"Forever I'll love you"
Is easy to say
But what if destiny
Didn't plan it that way?

My love forever
You say you will be
But what of the changes
Today we don't see?

We can't know for sure
What will happen tomorrow
What if today
Our love ends in sorrow?

But often enough
Our fears are unfounded
And things that were said
Weren't meant as they sounded

Words spoken in haste
By wrath overpowered
Weren't rational thoughts
Spoken in love's awesome power

Don't be too hasty
In making a vow
But if the promise is made
Keep it, somehow

Copyright © wachumiri ... [ 2004-03-31 15:44:32]
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Re: Love Forever? (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 04:35:57 PM AEST
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This has a nice ring to it, a flow... it's great. And... you must be in love, because you got the questions and fears perfectly worded. Nice write.

*J*

Re: Love Forever? (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 04:38:02 PM AEST
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is love forever i really dont ?but your poem brings hope that it so

Re: Love Forever? (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 05:15:08 PM AEST
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yes, always be genuine, great write, hugs n' love nessa

Re: Love Forever? (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 02:04:36 AM AEST
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Ah, excellent. Your habit of slant-rhyme is beginning to fade. Plenty of wisdom in here for a gawky computer freak like yourself. Nice job.

You-know-who

Re: Love Forever? (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 04:27:17 PM AEST
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Great advice. Love is a very overpowering emotion and only God knows where it will lead. Patience is a GOOD thing...I think;-)
~Love you,
Alicia

Re: Love Forever? (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 02:16:54 PM AEST
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Hmmm....this definitely got me thinking David, but ...tip of the iceberg....no tip of the hat for that one. Hahaha. How powerful love is! But should you keep your vow if it goes against God's plan for your life? Mind boggling!

Re: Love Forever? (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 08:59:28 PM AEST
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Despite what Andrew says, I like your rhymes. This one has a nice flow to it.

Love is real. It is just the lovers that are not real sometimes.

Lotsa love and peace be with you,

Chelsea

Re: Love Forever? (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 01:41:08 PM AEST
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Very well said. I'm struck by the maturity in the last stanza. It would be great if that was a universal idea.

Ann

Re: Love Forever? (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Wednesday, 12th December 2007 @ 01:41:05 PM AEST
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Seems the words, the thoughts and all were here.....So....it can be lost, yet, can it? beautiful words that capture a heart. Lots to think on with your writes.

brew~

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