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Array ( [sid] => 41074 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => THIS GIRL [time] => 2004-03-30 23:28:44 [hometext] => SEEN THIS WOMAN SITTING WITH HER MAN, THAT I WANTED TO BE WITH 29Mar04 [bodytext] => MET A GIRL TODAY
SHE WAS HOTTER THAN 50
OR THIS FLEECE IN THE SUMMER
WANTED TO CALL MY MAMA
BUT HERE COMES THE DRAMA
SHE HAD A MAN
AND I ADMIT I HAD OTHER PLANS
NO WAY AROUND IT
I'M ASTOUNDED AND BAFFLED
READY TO HUSTLE AND HASSLE
SO I APPROACHED
PRETTY EYES PUZZLED
BUT SHE GAVE ME A STARE
AS IF I WAS THE SAME
MISS I ADMIT I SPIT GAME
BUT FOR YOU I WOULD GIVE MY LEFT HAND
TO BE YOUR RIGHT MAN
BECAUSE WHOEVER YOU GOTS NOT
TO THE POINT I CAN'T STOP
SHE REPLIED MY IMPLIED
SHE SAID I WAS WILDIN
ASKING WHAT I GOT TO OFFER
PLENTY OF FEATURES MA
SO GET ME OFF THE LOT
REPLIED NOT TO MY SPOT
GOT A THING FOR LIGHT SKIN
BUT TAKE'EM IN SHADES
PRETTY BROWN EYES
SHE WAS IN MINT CONDITION
TO THE POINT SHE HAD ME WISHIN
WHAT'S YOUR NAME
WHO YOU AINT WIT
I'M JUST KID
THOUGH MADE YOU LAUGH
INTRODUCED HER TO THE 2ND HALF
SHE'S IN VERBAL SUBMISSION
FOUND HER STATS
REALZED WHAT I BEEN MISSIN
MOVIN FAST BUT WE STARTED KISSIN
MA DON'T STOP
I'LL SIGN THE PETITION
SHE RELAPSED AND REMEMBERED SHE HAD A MAN
GOT UP AND RAN OFF
TIL THIS DAY I'LL NEVER SEE HER AGAIN [comments] => 2 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 24 [informant] => Marcus493 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
THIS GIRL

Contributed by Marcus493 on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 11:28:44 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



MET A GIRL TODAY
SHE WAS HOTTER THAN 50
OR THIS FLEECE IN THE SUMMER
WANTED TO CALL MY MAMA
BUT HERE COMES THE DRAMA
SHE HAD A MAN
AND I ADMIT I HAD OTHER PLANS
NO WAY AROUND IT
I'M ASTOUNDED AND BAFFLED
READY TO HUSTLE AND HASSLE
SO I APPROACHED
PRETTY EYES PUZZLED
BUT SHE GAVE ME A STARE
AS IF I WAS THE SAME
MISS I ADMIT I SPIT GAME
BUT FOR YOU I WOULD GIVE MY LEFT HAND
TO BE YOUR RIGHT MAN
BECAUSE WHOEVER YOU GOTS NOT
TO THE POINT I CAN'T STOP
SHE REPLIED MY IMPLIED
SHE SAID I WAS WILDIN
ASKING WHAT I GOT TO OFFER
PLENTY OF FEATURES MA
SO GET ME OFF THE LOT
REPLIED NOT TO MY SPOT
GOT A THING FOR LIGHT SKIN
BUT TAKE'EM IN SHADES
PRETTY BROWN EYES
SHE WAS IN MINT CONDITION
TO THE POINT SHE HAD ME WISHIN
WHAT'S YOUR NAME
WHO YOU AINT WIT
I'M JUST KID
THOUGH MADE YOU LAUGH
INTRODUCED HER TO THE 2ND HALF
SHE'S IN VERBAL SUBMISSION
FOUND HER STATS
REALZED WHAT I BEEN MISSIN
MOVIN FAST BUT WE STARTED KISSIN
MA DON'T STOP
I'LL SIGN THE PETITION
SHE RELAPSED AND REMEMBERED SHE HAD A MAN
GOT UP AND RAN OFF
TIL THIS DAY I'LL NEVER SEE HER AGAIN




Copyright © Marcus493 ... [ 2004-03-30 23:28:44]
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Re: THIS GIRL (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:16:26 AM AEST
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Well done, felt like this before, you have a good talent!


Re: THIS GIRL (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 12:04:16 AM AEST
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You've definately got a different style!! I liked this. Write on!
Thumps ; 0 )




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