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[aid] => mick
[title] => Mirror
[time] => 2004-03-28 04:29:13
[hometext] => Who do you see? Looking back at me...??? This is also another write after a night of no sleep and a long hard look at myself and my life...in retrospect. Please Comment.
[bodytext] => Fake a smile just to avert attention Put on your world famous show Looks more to me like an unwanted side-show gag- where a fat lady with overactive glands shows off her well trimmed facial hair or some lonely clowns ride unicycles ten men high!- This is where I come day after day week after week and year after year To your place; your puppet show Full of idiots and fools all alike- STARING...you! Did you ever imagine life could turn out so horrible? Broke and alone on this dark desert road No trucks passing you by, no one there to pick up this lonely hitch-hiker who just needs some conversation to fill the void. She wanted to be so much (this hitchhiker)- amount to something; anything! She never realized how hard that would be- once she actually began to live- Reality finally blew down all her walls and made itself at home It's not all fun and games; there’s some work to be done No second season sitcom success Because you were canceled as soon as the pilot aired. Looking at you from where I stand I can't help but laugh and mock "potential"- My *** You never had a chance! Again- smile! They won't suspect a thing- Afterall, it's only you looking in this mirror- You are your hardest critic at all the most convenient times Mirrors reflect us in two ways- who we are (what I see when I look at you) and who you want to be (what you see). Just take my advice! [comments] => 5 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 6 [informant] => strange_lindsey [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
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