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Array ( [sid] => 40471 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => over, pleaz just leave [time] => 2004-03-27 05:12:07 [hometext] => good poem about love gone array [bodytext] => no more
no
you ain't comin' back
into my life
won't be down on my knees
break a sweat for ya
won't let ya back
to rip my heart out
and walk over it

tears i've cried
nights we fought
till the cock crowed
you always thought you
were right
but
you always turned out
to be wrong

i said
i loved you
and thats why i stayed
let you treat me like s***
we fought about it
night and day
until
you made one big mistake
knocked me down
and you hit me
you dirrrty damn bum
no matter what
you had no reason
ever
to lay a fist on me
and
i wasn't goin to lay there
get black and blue
i'm no dumb fool
so
you know i fought back
the vase shattered
against your face
oops
i bet that hurt
but ya know
i felt enpowered
got the stegthen
to leave you battered and bruised
bye bye

now you walk in
tryin' to say
you love me
and need me
and all
i can think is
you love me
thats why i got a black eye
and a busted lip
b/c you ****in' love me
well
you got a weird way of showin' it
black and blue never screamed
love, need, passion, want
so
i'm tellin you to leave
that its over
not one more word
or tear
for you

so
why won't you
walk out that door
without a fight
i said no
and no
means no
no mores games
no more yellin'
and screamin'
to get your attention
make you listen
no more pain
and anger
no more black and blue
this black and white
put it in print
no more
its over
i don't need you [comments] => 2 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 21 [informant] => ml03 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
over, pleaz just leave

Contributed by ml03 on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 05:12:07 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



no more
no
you ain't comin' back
into my life
won't be down on my knees
break a sweat for ya
won't let ya back
to rip my heart out
and walk over it

tears i've cried
nights we fought
till the cock crowed
you always thought you
were right
but
you always turned out
to be wrong

i said
i loved you
and thats why i stayed
let you treat me like s***
we fought about it
night and day
until
you made one big mistake
knocked me down
and you hit me
you dirrrty damn bum
no matter what
you had no reason
ever
to lay a fist on me
and
i wasn't goin to lay there
get black and blue
i'm no dumb fool
so
you know i fought back
the vase shattered
against your face
oops
i bet that hurt
but ya know
i felt enpowered
got the stegthen
to leave you battered and bruised
bye bye

now you walk in
tryin' to say
you love me
and need me
and all
i can think is
you love me
thats why i got a black eye
and a busted lip
b/c you ****in' love me
well
you got a weird way of showin' it
black and blue never screamed
love, need, passion, want
so
i'm tellin you to leave
that its over
not one more word
or tear
for you

so
why won't you
walk out that door
without a fight
i said no
and no
means no
no mores games
no more yellin'
and screamin'
to get your attention
make you listen
no more pain
and anger
no more black and blue
this black and white
put it in print
no more
its over
i don't need you




Copyright © ml03 ... [ 2004-03-27 05:12:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: over, pleaz just leave (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 05:24:40 AM AEST
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Good for you!
Very good write.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: over, pleaz just leave (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 04:50:53 PM AEST
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Oh what a strong poem! the messege is clear loved your style! Great write!
Anne :D




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