|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Array
(
[sid] => 40278
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => breezes blowing
[time] => 2004-03-25 20:27:09
[hometext] => my world...
[bodytext] =>
oh, come along and take my hand
let's walk all around this charmed land,
where crystal streams flow whilst hawks fly
where here ancient oak trees touch the sky,
deer, foxes and racoons, horses galore
sunrises breathtaking beautiful to adore,
enchanting forest deep, dark and thick
in all warm seasons pretty flowers to pick,
walnuts on the branch, grapes on the vine
roses, sassafras, butterflies, frogs singin' fine,
standing in brightest sun see storming horizens
anything goes here, in our misty romantic air,
the earth here is alive, cricket song vibrant
royal blue lizards, vultures, little army ants,
fields growing corn, many things to crave
cliffs and underground our mammoth caves,
indian legends about spirits, rivers, forests
abound in this land, here we are blessed,
where wolf, eagle and rabbit live side by side
bears we've a few, even elk from them hide,
blackberries, blueberries, pines, pink dogwoods,
willows hang to the ground, nature is understood,
from one closeby high point cumberland gap is seen
daniel boone, coyotes n' bears, there have been,
roaming these woodlands, our ancestors knowing
if you listen closely, you'll hear breezes blowing.
§* *§
*|*
[comments] => 17
[counter] => 272
[topic] => 30
[informant] => ladyfawn
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 25
[ratings] => 6
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => PoemsonBeauty
)
breezes blowing
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 08:27:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
|
oh, come along and take my hand
let's walk all around this charmed land,
where crystal streams flow whilst hawks fly
where here ancient oak trees touch the sky,
deer, foxes and racoons, horses galore
sunrises breathtaking beautiful to adore,
enchanting forest deep, dark and thick
in all warm seasons pretty flowers to pick,
walnuts on the branch, grapes on the vine
roses, sassafras, butterflies, frogs singin' fine,
standing in brightest sun see storming horizens
anything goes here, in our misty romantic air,
the earth here is alive, cricket song vibrant
royal blue lizards, vultures, little army ants,
fields growing corn, many things to crave
cliffs and underground our mammoth caves,
indian legends about spirits, rivers, forests
abound in this land, here we are blessed,
where wolf, eagle and rabbit live side by side
bears we've a few, even elk from them hide,
blackberries, blueberries, pines, pink dogwoods,
willows hang to the ground, nature is understood,
from one closeby high point cumberland gap is seen
daniel boone, coyotes n' bears, there have been,
roaming these woodlands, our ancestors knowing
if you listen closely, you'll hear breezes blowing.
§* *§
*|*
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
... [
2004-03-25 20:27:09]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: breezes blowing
(User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 08:34:23 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I'm coming to visit!!! lol - beautiful, love it, I can see it all as I read the words - you have made spring come alive!
Hugs
daisy*merry |
|
|
Re: breezes blowing
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 08:39:29 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I'm thinking it spells one word---"Retreat"
Sounds like my version of spring paradise.
You took me there Nessa. Kie |
|
|
Re: breezes blowing
(User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 08:51:12 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| OMG Nessa, this is tremendous. WOW! It's breathtaking. I could picture everything in my mind's eye. Beautifully written. *S* Cynthia |
|
|
Re: breezes blowing
(User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 08:52:35 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
You just took me on a dream walk in paradise...your way of describing nature is impeccable Nessa. This was just breathtakingly beautiful.
Very well done
Roses
Larry |
|
|
Re: breezes blowing
(User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 01:32:40 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Mesmarisingly beautiful..I love this Nessa..
just sweeping impact. venkat |
|
|
Re: breezes blowing
(User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 01:56:38 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Love the picture this painted! Beautiful! Christina |
|
|
Re: breezes blowing
(User Rating: 1 )
by badlander on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 02:20:25 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
ANY TICKETS LEFT?? I - WANT - TO - GO!!!!!
beautiful!
tony |
|
|
Re: breezes blowing
(User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 09:47:19 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Just beautiful ... your description of a world I'd like to visit ... heaven sent ... Jan |
|
|
Re: breezes blowing
(User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 12:57:06 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is beautiful, I would love to live here. Love the imagery and descriptions, you can really see everything you describe. Excellent poem
Love Dawny x |
|
|
Re: breezes blowing
(User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 01:34:51 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Another peaceful poem!!! Wow! Relaxing poetry! Full with vivid images took me there! Awesome write!
Anne :D |
|
|
Re: breezes blowing
(User Rating: 1 )
by arden on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 09:08:52 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
ohhh that was so beautiful! i loved this, just so well written and wowy lol. impressive.
Arden |
|
|
Re: breezes blowing
(User Rating: 1 )
by Soulless on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:06:42 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
your words send radient thoughts and pictures to my head. I love your description. I wish is were that easy to fall into your world. It sounds so peaceful and beautiful.
How I wish to be there.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
|
|
Re: breezes blowing
(User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 05:00:43 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| You world sounds like a beautiful place... thnx for sharing it with us |
|
|
Re: breezes blowing
(User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 10:21:37 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
WoW AWESOME Write Nessa
Given Glory To The Creator....
This Could Be A Vision Of Heaven....
,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,, |
|
|
Re: breezes blowing
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:38:31 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
What a beautiful picture you have painted.. I'm sorry now I'm not gonna see it except in my mind.....
Hugs
Jenni |
|
|
Re: breezes blowing
(User Rating: 1 )
by twinkletoes on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 07:28:53 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
nature so well captured....
tt |
|
|
Re: breezes blowing
(User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 02:07:40 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
REALLY COOL POEM! NATURE IS A GREAT SUBJECT TO WRITE ABOUT!! THE POINT OF THE POEM WAS A GOOD ONE,I HOPE OTHERS GET IT TOO!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
