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[title] => Suicidal Tendencies
[time] => 2004-03-25 17:07:14
[hometext] => This was written at a VERY bad time in my childhood... This was me at my lowest... I look back and I still want to cry, I felt so hopeless. Please comment.
[bodytext] => Writing this story in crimson ink from my wrist drops sour, sweet on my tongue and the blood smears and slowly glides onto the tiles beneath. In this small oval prison the water creeps higher and higher until I am chin deep, and the red soaked water begins to fill my lungs. In the other room the telephone rings and I am startled for no one had ever cared to call upon me until I am so deeply covered in my own pity that I am now beginning to feel like I’ve sinned. I try to move but I am held down by the pressure of the water and my own actions that bricks begin to pile atop my naked body and I am sinking further down into the murky, burgundy waters of my doom. Alas a voice I hear quite muffled through the wet surrounding my head but still reassuring and graceful for with the voice came a great sigh of relief for the emptiness has been filled the evil hand of humanity, fate and judgment have been lifted and I suck in one last mouthful of blood soaked water and wait to feel it fill my lungs and all- sound, smell, sight, taste and touch disappear. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 36 [informant] => strange_lindsey [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
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