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[aid] => mick
[title] => my muse
[time] => 2004-03-22 00:40:27
[hometext] => ramblings of a drunken poet to a sweetheart
[bodytext] => the beauty within is opened up by the words, i accept you. this world needs more acceptance, and with this tolerance is fostered, once tolerance is fostered...peace follows. we all should use words in writing that are words we can be proud of later in life, we should not use words that we will shy away from or not be able to read for fear of embarrassment. let there be acceptance. i felt acceptance the other day, quickly followed was joy, enough joy that i was consumed and felt totally humbled. i have tried to write of it but have found i am unable to do so except to say these 4 lines..........
what is this beauty i see
that has given so few a words
is it the love i have for you
or that you have for me?
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my muse
Contributed by
twinkletoes
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Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 12:40:27 AM in AEST
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the beauty within is opened up by the words, i accept you. this world needs more acceptance, and with this tolerance is fostered, once tolerance is fostered...peace follows. we all should use words in writing that are words we can be proud of later in life, we should not use words that we will shy away from or not be able to read for fear of embarrassment. let there be acceptance. i felt acceptance the other day, quickly followed was joy, enough joy that i was consumed and felt totally humbled. i have tried to write of it but have found i am unable to do so except to say these 4 lines..........
what is this beauty i see
that has given so few a words
is it the love i have for you
or that you have for me?
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Re: my muse
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 12:45:18 AM AEST
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I am thinking this is something very personal, so I will simply say well done and wish you the best of luck ;o).
Larry |
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Re: my muse
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 01:00:42 AM AEST
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tt; it is a lovely soliloquy and your last four lines are beautifully written.
Rita |
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Re: my muse
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 02:42:13 AM AEST
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you could have added
when i gaze into your eyes,
your beauty is a sin,
cook me a breakfast with some fries,
And it's your turn to get them in!
only trying to help! it,s great being drunk! |
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Re: my muse
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 03:08:52 AM AEST
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| Beautiful thoughts ... sometimes just a few words are all you need ... Jan |
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Re: my muse
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 06:53:17 AM AEST
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| well done...personal or impersonal..it is simply beautiful.. venkat |
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Re: my muse
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 07:34:41 PM AEST
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~:*simply beautiful*:~ hugs n' love nessa
@->>->- |
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Re: my muse
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 10:44:37 AM AEST
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Getting drunk is a favoured pastime of mine, simply because I see everyone's true colours, when they are too. This is very honest, and full of candour.
Very touching and although the preamble is written in prose, it helps to infuse the sense of unbridled, drunken honesty.
An original write.
Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: my muse
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by ever1der on
Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 12:17:36 AM AEST
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Once, a long time ago..(and I say this with tears) someone came to my poetic defense..someone was giving me zeros..LOL. anyway..he said he was tipsy..and the things he said; well, tipsy or not...he made me feel so great..
I learned the word schlong..rotflmao. He became my muse for awhile...this reminds me of that. thanks...... |
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Re: my muse
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 1st November 2007 @ 01:38:22 PM AEST
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Deep and inspiring. Well said, and well written.
Take care,
David |
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