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Array ( [sid] => 39583 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I WANT TO LET GO [time] => 2004-03-21 09:28:01 [hometext] => THIS IS ABOUT LOVING SOMEONE AND FINDING IT HARD TO LET GO, EVEN THOUGH THEY ARE NOT TOGETHER..THE HEART WONT LET GO OR ALLOW LOVE OF ANOTHER IN HER LIFE..ITS NEEDING AND WANTING TO LOVE ANOTHER AND HOPING FATE WILL ALLOW IT... [bodytext] => will there ever be a time for me,
when i wont feel we are destined to be.
its been about 20 years that you've held my heart,
and 10 years of being together and apart.
i wish my love for you would come to and end.
i need a chance to love again.
i feel like im chained to the bottom of the sea,
my love for you is weakening me.
i always keep room or some sort of hope,
and that's the thing that helps me cope.
any man that comes into my space,
automatically knows you have a place.
why cant i let go and love another guy.
why wont my heart let me try.
you are my first love & my first kiss,
what we shared was pure bliss.
i have to let you go, first in my mind then in my heart,
i need to make a fresh new start.
i want to let the love of another in my life again,
but i scared my heart wont let him in.
will i compare him to you and give him a chance,
will he make me love him an make my heart dance.
will i unknowingly and slowly let you go,
will my heart not yearn for you any mo.
will he win my heart and we become one,
will i want your touch when all is said and done.
the answer i will live upon along the way,
and i will take it day for day.
and hope that fate will also be kind
and allow me to have a love without you on my mind [comments] => 4 [counter] => 282 [topic] => 24 [informant] => desire [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
I WANT TO LET GO

Contributed by desire on Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 09:28:01 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



will there ever be a time for me,
when i wont feel we are destined to be.
its been about 20 years that you've held my heart,
and 10 years of being together and apart.
i wish my love for you would come to and end.
i need a chance to love again.
i feel like im chained to the bottom of the sea,
my love for you is weakening me.
i always keep room or some sort of hope,
and that's the thing that helps me cope.
any man that comes into my space,
automatically knows you have a place.
why cant i let go and love another guy.
why wont my heart let me try.
you are my first love & my first kiss,
what we shared was pure bliss.
i have to let you go, first in my mind then in my heart,
i need to make a fresh new start.
i want to let the love of another in my life again,
but i scared my heart wont let him in.
will i compare him to you and give him a chance,
will he make me love him an make my heart dance.
will i unknowingly and slowly let you go,
will my heart not yearn for you any mo.
will he win my heart and we become one,
will i want your touch when all is said and done.
the answer i will live upon along the way,
and i will take it day for day.
and hope that fate will also be kind
and allow me to have a love without you on my mind




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Re: I WANT TO LET GO (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 10:04:58 AM AEST
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What a poem! Very well expressed. Hope all your wishes come true. Great write!
Anne :D


Re: I WANT TO LET GO (User Rating: 1 )
by THUGPASSION on Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 10:14:46 AM AEST
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WOW I FEEL THE SAME WAY ABOUT SUM1 N MY LIFE MY BEST FRIEND HOOKED UP WIT MY EX BUT I STILL LOVE HIM TODAY THEY HAD A 5 YEAR RELATIONSHIP AN NOW THEY'ER JUST FRIENDS BUT SHE STILL LOVE HIM BUT SHE WONT TELL ME THAT BUT SHE DONT NO I STILL LOVE HIM 2 AN I PRETEND DAT I HATE HIM BUT ITS NOT REALLY HATE ITS LOVE I JUST CANT DO ANY THING BOUT IT.. ANY ADVICE???


Re: I WANT TO LET GO (User Rating: 1 )
by uchendu on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 06:40:13 AM AEST
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Gat to get over this through poetry...


Re: I WANT TO LET GO (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 01:14:21 PM AEST
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well good - felt like i could imagine the situation




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