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Array ( [sid] => 39442 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Futility of Letting Go [time] => 2004-03-20 04:53:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => as i lie awake and alone in my room
with nothing left but the scent of your perfume
ill think about you and wish you were mine
hoping one day our hearts will intertwine

dont worry love, i wont call you tonight
but ill still dream about you, if thats alright
ill make believe that you and i are one
but this dream was over before it begun

i try so hard to let you go
and forget what i should have so long ago
everything inside tells me to leave this dream
ive built of us behind

but i still drown in your eyes
and my heart still stops when you walk by
thoughts of you still keep me up at night
and no matter how hard i try to fake it
nothing is alright
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The Futility of Letting Go

Contributed by mylosthoughts on Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 04:53:41 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

as i lie awake and alone in my room
with nothing left but the scent of your perfume
ill think about you and wish you were mine
hoping one day our hearts will intertwine

dont worry love, i wont call you tonight
but ill still dream about you, if thats alright
ill make believe that you and i are one
but this dream was over before it begun

i try so hard to let you go
and forget what i should have so long ago
everything inside tells me to leave this dream
ive built of us behind

but i still drown in your eyes
and my heart still stops when you walk by
thoughts of you still keep me up at night
and no matter how hard i try to fake it
nothing is alright
..without you

Copyright © mylosthoughts ... [ 2004-03-20 04:53:41]
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Re: The Futility of Letting Go (User Rating: 1 )
by addie on Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 03:00:00 PM AEST
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absolutely amazing.. i can truely relate to this ....i can imagine how one feels....trying to let go everynight ...but don't u worry...its all destiny....believe in it ... it will happen..

keep writing

take care
addie

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