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Array ( [sid] => 39303 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the mirror of your soul [time] => 2004-03-19 08:26:02 [hometext] => [bodytext] => When you have your arms around me
I can feel the love we have
Whenever I hear you speak
I hear a soft and tender voice

When I look at your face
I see the face of an angel
Whenever I touch you
I touch the body of a God

And everytime I say "I love you"
you say "I love you too"
But how can you expect me
to believe in all those lies

Because everytime you hit me
I see the Devil in your eyes [comments] => 4 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 48 [informant] => gothicangel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

the mirror of your soul

Contributed by gothicangel on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 08:26:02 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

When you have your arms around me
I can feel the love we have
Whenever I hear you speak
I hear a soft and tender voice

When I look at your face
I see the face of an angel
Whenever I touch you
I touch the body of a God

And everytime I say "I love you"
you say "I love you too"
But how can you expect me
to believe in all those lies

Because everytime you hit me
I see the Devil in your eyes

Copyright © gothicangel ... [ 2004-03-19 08:26:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: the mirror of your soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 01:12:12 PM AEST
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What an unexpected ending! My i'm still under mild shock. Very good poem! Keep it up! (I hope that everything is ok)
Anne :D

Re: the mirror of your soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 02:10:02 PM AEST
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May the arms that surround you be arms of love. I hope it all works out for you.
Take care.
David

Re: the mirror of your soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 06:47:29 PM AEST
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Great impact at the end, so unexpected......as being hit by someone who says they love you must be.

Steve

Re: the mirror of your soul (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:26:50 AM AEST
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ooppss, i thought it was fairly good until i got hit in the head with the last bit, that was a huge impact, reflecting again upon the poem. Very well done.....That last bit made it 5 stars for me for sure

Silent

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