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Array ( [sid] => 39244 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Side Effects [time] => 2004-03-18 21:10:24 [hometext] => What drugs can do to mess you up. Well in a different view [bodytext] => Whisper to me
What you see
The yellow skies
And black trees
All the ugly things
Shadows and skulls
In deep narrow halls

Whisper what you see
Inside of me
A broke twig
And loose limbs
My body's dim
With my pale skin

Whisper to me
What you see
Walking dead
And cut off heads
Whisper you needs
Inside my ear
Whisper your fears
So I can hear

Whisper to me
Whisper it
So I can see
Let me taste you bleed
Scream to me
What you can't whisper
Your own body blurs
And standing up behind your neck
Whisper to all,
Your Almighty Fall. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 39 [informant] => fldadn1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

The Side Effects

Contributed by fldadn1 on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 09:10:24 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Whisper to me
What you see
The yellow skies
And black trees
All the ugly things
Shadows and skulls
In deep narrow halls

Whisper what you see
Inside of me
A broke twig
And loose limbs
My body's dim
With my pale skin

Whisper to me
What you see
Walking dead
And cut off heads
Whisper you needs
Inside my ear
Whisper your fears
So I can hear

Whisper to me
Whisper it
So I can see
Let me taste you bleed
Scream to me
What you can't whisper
Your own body blurs
And standing up behind your neck
Whisper to all,
Your Almighty Fall.

Copyright © fldadn1 ... [ 2004-03-18 21:10:24]
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Re: The Side Effects (User Rating: 1 )
by youlied on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 09:23:32 PM AEST
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I love this poem, you're an awesome writer!

Re: The Side Effects (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 05:04:47 PM AEST
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wow! this is really good.
my mate is on drugs to, she's gonna dob her-self in though coz she says she's getting flash backs and things. i under-stand how you feel coz even though she doesn't have it as bad as you, i can still relate to you both in the same sort of way.

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