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shiver's my spine stands my hair
emptiness fills this room
alone i stand this space i share

rejected feelings slammed in face
abandonment issues i must address
exclusion from friends everywhere
alone am i is what i confess

with out this room filled with you
into the abyss i keep falling
deeper away i drift alone
not my name i hear you calling

fingers reaching out to you
finding only that empty space
no hands to hold me anymore
and now my past i must face
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(((ALONE)))

Contributed by putteragain on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 05:14:31 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I feel a coldness never felt before
shiver's my spine stands my hair
emptiness fills this room
alone i stand this space i share

rejected feelings slammed in face
abandonment issues i must address
exclusion from friends everywhere
alone am i is what i confess

with out this room filled with you
into the abyss i keep falling
deeper away i drift alone
not my name i hear you calling

fingers reaching out to you
finding only that empty space
no hands to hold me anymore
and now my past i must face

Copyright © putteragain ... [ 2004-03-18 17:14:31]
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Re: (((ALONE))) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 05:19:36 PM AEST
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I hate the thought of facing my past, every morning when i wake i close my eyes and throw the past of a cliff or some other horrible demise i can think off, we all cope in different ways! i'm just happy to be in the present.
a very good read

wildejohnny

Re: (((ALONE))) (User Rating: 1 )
by Sarafina on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 06:25:24 PM AEST
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Nice poem. It helps to know theres others that feel what I feel.

Re: (((ALONE))) (User Rating: 1 )
by TwEeK on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 06:37:04 PM AEST
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Wow, thats the way i feel right now
nice poem, i like it very descriptive, like the words u used

Re: (((ALONE))) (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 07:01:59 PM AEST
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touching write but though you feel it your never ever alone Im here as far as the past thing I went through some of it myself yesterday bitter sweet I must admit but we cant taste the sweet without trying to swallow the bitter. Im here if you need me
michelle

Re: (((ALONE))) (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 01:03:10 AM AEST
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Very nice. You expressed lonliness in words that touch us all. And isn't that what it's all about?

Re: (((ALONE))) (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 06:51:31 AM AEST
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Its a terrible thing to have to face the past.....This poem is really powerful! Amazing write! Glad to hear you're ok ;)
Anne :D

Re: (((ALONE))) (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 12:03:58 PM AEST
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Woah! Been there. Best thing about it is that when you get there, you realize that He is always there and never lets you go. Makes you trust Him even more. I really like this. The last stanza is the best.
Stitch

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