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Array ( [sid] => 39138 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => By Faith Guided [time] => 2004-03-18 05:57:29 [hometext] => Inspired by love. The most amazing feeling ever! Thank you Dan (vitreous_soul) for the title you have given it [bodytext] => A love beyond an ocean vast
The feeling flourishing, growing fast
Further than stars glittering in the dark
Bonding together, forming a new spark

Two halves making each other whole
Two halves together, complete a soul
Our love blossoming from each epoch
Growing closer together, every hour on the clock

Living out a dream come true
Living blissfully, this feeling new
So lucky to receive this God given gift
Bringing such mirth, giving life a lift

The Lord guiding us, combining our trails
With each other and God, we cannot fail
Together forever, without a shadow of a doubt
With him so happy, cannot live without
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By Faith Guided

Contributed by starlight_dancer on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 05:57:29 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

A love beyond an ocean vast
The feeling flourishing, growing fast
Further than stars glittering in the dark
Bonding together, forming a new spark

Two halves making each other whole
Two halves together, complete a soul
Our love blossoming from each epoch
Growing closer together, every hour on the clock

Living out a dream come true
Living blissfully, this feeling new
So lucky to receive this God given gift
Bringing such mirth, giving life a lift

The Lord guiding us, combining our trails
With each other and God, we cannot fail
Together forever, without a shadow of a doubt
With him so happy, cannot live without

Copyright © starlight_dancer ... [ 2004-03-18 05:57:29]
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Re: By Faith Guided (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 06:04:18 AM AEST
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Wow Sarah. Love and emotion radiate from this piece. This really is an artwork, one of the best (and most romantic) i've read.

"The Lord guiding us, combining our trails
With each other and God, we cannot fail"...that part just melted me! Exceptional writing, smooth flow, and excellent rhyme (especially epoch/clock).

Brilliant job, your talent only continues to grow and astound.

Love always and forever,
-Dan

Re: By Faith Guided (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 08:15:20 AM AEST
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I enjoyed reading that. thanks

Re: By Faith Guided (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 08:47:59 AM AEST
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How loving, how kind, sincere and filled with hope!
Blissful love with sparks flying to and fro...
I'm so glad you can experience this marvelous feeling you two as you go!
Wonderfully written poem......I loved reading
of two hearts joining and feeling.......
So many today are going just the opposite way
Let nothing in all this world hold you back from
loving one another...bless your hearts from
one that knows hearts together!
love, and blessings
consue

Re: By Faith Guided (User Rating: 1 )
by Pwei on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:53:40 PM AEST
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Sarah,

Remember love can cover any distance and beat every obstacle. Reading this poem I know you believe it!

"Come sail your ships around me, and burn my bridges down, Nick Cave.

Emotion can break down any barrier!

Re: By Faith Guided (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 12:59:43 PM AEST
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absolutely amazing piece...

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