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Array ( [sid] => 39106 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Have Beautiful Eyes [time] => 2004-03-17 23:40:21 [hometext] => For Helen... my *adopted* niece... written October 2003... comments welcomed... [bodytext] => Words can't express the beauty I see
When I gaze into your eyes so blue... so deep
So deep... as the deepest of blue seas
So blue... as the bluest of skies at twilight
Your eyes sparkle and shine like diamonds in the soft pale moonlight
You have beautiful eyes...

Your eyes could light up the darkest of nights
And make the world a paradise
You have beautiful eyes...

Your eyes glow with excitement, love and wonderment
And carry a mischievous gleam
Sometimes to the extreme

But sometimes, too, your eyes can lie
Betraying to the world the thoughts you hold deep inside
Those jagged, torn bits and pieces of your life
You would rather keep hidden within... hoping someday they will mend

Let the beauty sparkle and shine
Don't hide it within the dark depths of your life
You have beautiful eyes... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 358 [topic] => 48 [informant] => kidpoet_213 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
You Have Beautiful Eyes

Contributed by kidpoet_213 on Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 11:40:21 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Words can't express the beauty I see
When I gaze into your eyes so blue... so deep
So deep... as the deepest of blue seas
So blue... as the bluest of skies at twilight
Your eyes sparkle and shine like diamonds in the soft pale moonlight
You have beautiful eyes...

Your eyes could light up the darkest of nights
And make the world a paradise
You have beautiful eyes...

Your eyes glow with excitement, love and wonderment
And carry a mischievous gleam
Sometimes to the extreme

But sometimes, too, your eyes can lie
Betraying to the world the thoughts you hold deep inside
Those jagged, torn bits and pieces of your life
You would rather keep hidden within... hoping someday they will mend

Let the beauty sparkle and shine
Don't hide it within the dark depths of your life
You have beautiful eyes...




Copyright © kidpoet_213 ... [ 2004-03-17 23:40:21]
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Re: You Have Beautiful Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 05:52:59 AM AEST
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A~W~E~S~O~M~E~
W~R~I~T~E~
Loved It.......Great Job
,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,


Re: You Have Beautiful Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 10:13:27 AM AEST
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You say that words cannot express the beauty you see, but I think you are mistaking there. Beautiful




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