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Array ( [sid] => 38953 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Behind her painful eyes [time] => 2004-03-16 22:05:25 [hometext] => This is all of my fears and some of others that i happened to observe------ shasha07 [bodytext] => Her the strong one who took all that she could take,
All her misery taking up her empty space,
He took her,
Abused her,
And broker her in two,
His heart as black as ebony and as cold as ice,
She was so cheerful and bright till he showed her pain,
The darkness began to consume her joy and bring her tumbling down,
The darkest day she'll ever know,
And in the snow,
It reminds her of the love she once had,
Seeing how the snow can be wonderful at the begining but deadly at the end,
The cold enveous girl trapped by her hatred for the man who subjected her to this pain,
The man that messed with her emotions who would make her feel insane,
That fateful day came like the snow crept on december,
She was fed up with everyone,
She continued on to the bridge,
Where she stood on the railing of the biggest bridge,
She hated the world it has always been cruel to her (she thought),
And so she took her jump and plummited to her fate that would show him the wrong that he has cause but not enough for him not to do it to another,
As she falls we hear her say,
I will always be here when you need me but also to make him pay for what he did to me and others. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 262 [topic] => 13 [informant] => shasha07 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Behind her painful eyes

Contributed by shasha07 on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 10:05:25 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Her the strong one who took all that she could take,
All her misery taking up her empty space,
He took her,
Abused her,
And broker her in two,
His heart as black as ebony and as cold as ice,
She was so cheerful and bright till he showed her pain,
The darkness began to consume her joy and bring her tumbling down,
The darkest day she'll ever know,
And in the snow,
It reminds her of the love she once had,
Seeing how the snow can be wonderful at the begining but deadly at the end,
The cold enveous girl trapped by her hatred for the man who subjected her to this pain,
The man that messed with her emotions who would make her feel insane,
That fateful day came like the snow crept on december,
She was fed up with everyone,
She continued on to the bridge,
Where she stood on the railing of the biggest bridge,
She hated the world it has always been cruel to her (she thought),
And so she took her jump and plummited to her fate that would show him the wrong that he has cause but not enough for him not to do it to another,
As she falls we hear her say,
I will always be here when you need me but also to make him pay for what he did to me and others.

Copyright © shasha07 ... [ 2004-03-16 22:05:25]
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Re: Behind her painful eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 02:03:54 AM AEST
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wow... strong write, i like there theme behind it... beautiful, i like it!! good write! ;0)
~Remy~

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