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Array ( [sid] => 38643 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Failed [time] => 2004-03-14 21:19:43 [hometext] => ...that feeling of failure, I feel it a lot these days... [bodytext] => its like Im out to fail
my world about to set sail
a never ending nightmare
never worthy of a care
can't seem to do anything right
can't seem to put up a fight
but what's it all worth in the end
my life's road is an uphill bend
just when I think Im free
and the sun finally shines on me
the clouds quickly cover
Im left there to suffer
what's a sigh worth when no one can hear
hope is too far away from here
seems like Im falling
but no-one's calling
I failed everyone even myself
and the photos are falling off the shelf
give me just one more reason to live on and try
one more reason why I shouldn't give up and die [comments] => 7 [counter] => 236 [topic] => 13 [informant] => pompous [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Failed

Contributed by pompous on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 09:19:43 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

its like Im out to fail
my world about to set sail
a never ending nightmare
never worthy of a care
can't seem to do anything right
can't seem to put up a fight
but what's it all worth in the end
my life's road is an uphill bend
just when I think Im free
and the sun finally shines on me
the clouds quickly cover
Im left there to suffer
what's a sigh worth when no one can hear
hope is too far away from here
seems like Im falling
but no-one's calling
I failed everyone even myself
and the photos are falling off the shelf
give me just one more reason to live on and try
one more reason why I shouldn't give up and die

Copyright © pompous ... [ 2004-03-14 21:19:43]
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Re: Failed (User Rating: 1 )
by fallensilence on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 09:32:21 PM AEST
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very powerful poem. im sure that everyone feels this way at some time in their life. dont give in though. -david

Re: Failed (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 10:21:57 PM AEST
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Don't give up. The sun will eventually shine for you. Just keep on the straight and narrow and keep putting one foot ahead of the other. You will eventually get to where you want to go. It worked for me, it can work for you too.

Rita

Re: Failed (User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 10:09:16 AM AEST
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Wow, I could've almost witten this myself you know. My family make me feel like this all the time but I've come to the conclusion, if they don't want to be positive influences in my life then bye bye, don't need them, they are not worthy of my time. I'm sure you have someone who will listen to your call, I will if you like, been there, done that, got the t-shirt lol. Pm me if you wanna rant.

Ali xx

Re: Failed (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 02:46:04 PM AEST
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A vivid expression of hopelessness and despair...I have similar views and experiences....one thing to be grateful for and to continue to soldier on in your dreary existance though...you did write this and I must say it is rather nice. I have made it my mission to spread misery through poetry as my revenge upon an unforgiving world...you could do as wel..he he he....anyway...nice one!

Re: Failed (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 08:55:33 PM AEST
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i think we all feel like this, or else what would we have to motivate us? beautiful expression of feelings here, keep writing:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: Failed (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 04:55:05 AM AEST
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So Sad But Yet
Nice Write
I sometimes Feel
Like I've Failed In Life
And The Dark Clouds
Cover Me....Hang In There
Hun And Be Strong....
,,,,,,,Love,,,,,,,,And,,,,,,Hugs,,,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,

Re: Failed (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 05:43:37 AM AEST
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Number one we need u as a poet-n-writer
nuvmber two anyone can give up but it takes guts to survive on this planet.
I can go on but I think u get the point.
Luv, huggs, hope, faith, confidence in yourself,
emy
Thank u so much for your comment on my work.
Hang tuff friend!

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