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Array ( [sid] => 38352 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Suicide [time] => 2004-03-12 10:39:50 [hometext] => I don't know what went wrong when I wrote this poem. But this is the result. comments please. [bodytext] => I know that you are sorry,
I told you not to worry.
My life will be taken anyway,
no matter what you say.
I know It is not clever,
but It is now or never.
God have no mercy for me,
I think this is meant to be.
I will finally be left alone.
You know my heart is made of stone.
I hate every minute of my life,
I just force that knife
Into my veins and blood,
God, It feels so good.
The pain is so delicious,
and maybe so dangerous.
My life have always been full of rain,
nothing can ever take away from me the pain.
I beg you not to try,
It will only make you cry.
I can not take this burden no more,
all that is left is this huge sore.
I do not know what went wrong,
But I can no longer stay strong.
I know there will be no tomorrow,
Only death can drown my sorrow.
I know you know It is sad,
but you know that dreams of me witch dying,
is the best I have ever had.
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My Suicide

Contributed by gothicangel on Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 10:39:50 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I know that you are sorry,
I told you not to worry.
My life will be taken anyway,
no matter what you say.
I know It is not clever,
but It is now or never.
God have no mercy for me,
I think this is meant to be.
I will finally be left alone.
You know my heart is made of stone.
I hate every minute of my life,
I just force that knife
Into my veins and blood,
God, It feels so good.
The pain is so delicious,
and maybe so dangerous.
My life have always been full of rain,
nothing can ever take away from me the pain.
I beg you not to try,
It will only make you cry.
I can not take this burden no more,
all that is left is this huge sore.
I do not know what went wrong,
But I can no longer stay strong.
I know there will be no tomorrow,
Only death can drown my sorrow.
I know you know It is sad,
but you know that dreams of me witch dying,
is the best I have ever had.

Copyright © gothicangel ... [ 2004-03-12 10:39:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 11:21:55 AM AEST
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You express your pain well in this poem. I thought it was a good poem and if you are thinking these thoughts that you wrote about remember it will get better if you just hang in there. Thank you for sharing this. Kie

Re: My Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by lostlove on Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 01:28:35 PM AEST
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Good poem! I loved the emotion! Just take one day at a time and everything MIGHT get better. you will never know what will happen tommorrow

Re: My Suicide (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 02:10:36 PM AEST
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Great poem, keep on the good work! This is one of the best poems I have ever read!

Re: My Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Dina on Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 05:31:50 PM AEST
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It is really sad, but well written and felt.

Re: My Suicide (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 08:36:15 PM AEST
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great write but totaly sad if your thinking these aweful thought's in your mind just do me one favor and think on how your family and friends would feel Trust me it's not a great feeling to see a loved one gone forever..I just lost a dear and very close friend of mine from taking her own life and I blame myself for not being there for her..I just posted it if you want to read it.. A Friends Suicide note.. Love AnGel

Re: My Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by TwEeK on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 12:19:29 AM AEST
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whoa, you must be really deperssed? cheer up things 'll get better in the long run.
I really liked the emotion and feeling of pain and suffering given out by this!
Magnifico!!

Re: My Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 01:13:16 PM AEST
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so sad. but written very well. i really like this good expression of pain. great write.
Arden

Re: My Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:32:11 PM AEST
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this is a very good and emotional write gothic...i hope you dont really feel this way although i know the feeling all to well. i also like how you incorporate the song lyrics into the end of the poem. great job. Lindsey

Re: My Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 07:32:59 AM AEST
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2 of the lines in there made me cringe, exceptionally put into words. Someone i used to know had deep scars all up her arms from doing that *****, ain't too nice.

Very vivid, umm yeah

Silent

Re: My Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by jjones12 on Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 08:47:03 PM AEST
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you need counseling! believe me i was the same way and got couselling. it worked.
=Jen=

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