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but some how we adjust
and sometimes love comes
to those who aren't
entitled to it

i guess if love was
m a n a g e a b l e
there would be more
people willing to
take the risk

if you knew me better
you would know the
last thing i want to
do is harm you

i only wish
you'd say more
and tell me what
you long for -
or maybe miss
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Shadows Of Our Waking Lives

Contributed by faithmairee on Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 06:07:12 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

love is not easy
but some how we adjust
and sometimes love comes
to those who aren't
entitled to it

i guess if love was
m a n a g e a b l e
there would be more
people willing to
take the risk

if you knew me better
you would know the
last thing i want to
do is harm you

i only wish
you'd say more
and tell me what
you long for -
or maybe miss

Copyright © faithmairee ... [ 2004-03-12 06:07:12]
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Re: Shadows Of Our Waking Lives (User Rating: 1 )
by Jolly on Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 06:29:02 AM AEST
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if only....ah well. great write!!!

Re: Shadows Of Our Waking Lives (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 07:43:12 AM AEST
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Very clever and well thought out write, if only love was more managable, i know what you mean by those not entitled to love finding it, sometimes that is the way, nice guy/gals do finish last, an expressive and creative write, stiring emotions and excellently structured a pure joy to read

Luke

Re: Shadows Of Our Waking Lives (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 12:40:38 PM AEST
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You said so much in your poem. The last stanza really hit me. Great job on this one. Kie

Re: Shadows Of Our Waking Lives (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 02:30:39 AM AEST
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love this, great title, and also how you did your 7th line, wonderful, hugs n' love nessa

Re: Shadows Of Our Waking Lives (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 10:15:54 AM AEST
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What a great line
"I guess if love was manageable".
Fantastic,the kind of line I wish I had thought of.
Great piece, thx for sharing it

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