Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 03-June 06:26:11 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 37973 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm No Angel. [time] => 2004-03-09 14:39:56 [hometext] => This is about today at school. i know i was bad, but thats what my schools like. i guess it's affected me, living with things for soo long! but if i do behave then i'm different and i hate being that person to get picked on! [bodytext] => Dull sight,
Comes to me,
As I open my eyes from my sleep,
I’ve over-slept again.
I rub my eyes,
As I look around,
My cuts show,
My broken life has been found.
As it all comes back,
All my thoughts and pain,
I hold my head…
I wish it would go away.
And then I get up,
To face it all again,
To feel the heartache,
That rips at me in its game.
Ok, well school was all right,
At first,
But by the time I’d left my,
Brain had burst.

I went round in this group-
I joined some hard kids,
Because I’m sick of taking it.
And they like me enough,
So we vandalized the toilets,
They set off the fire extinguisher,
They played abit round with the fire alarm,
And I gobbed on the ground,
to try to look hard.
But now I think about it, I know that it was wrong,
It shouldn’t have happened, but it did, the damage is done.
And I’d proberly do it again… because if I don’t, I’m the looser kid.
That people hate, swear at and kick!
We mucked around out the front, where we weren’t meant to go,
Then the head saw us, so we ran…
we broke these rules at lunch, because it’s easy,
We know we can.
Then they play fighted, doing stupid childish slaps,
So I ran up, and pushed into one, it made her look like a prat!
She fell out the door, landed, laughing out-side,
Then loads of people starting staring at us,
looking a me like she could have died.

then when they'd all gone, all but 2,
one of them made me snap.
i felt angry, and used.
i held her up, by her neck,
held up her head, and spoke out, she'd be dead, if she said that again!
she looked all shocked, that i'd answered back, i looked at her smiling, patted her on the back, told her i was joking, even though i weren't, but i hope i got her thinking, she musn't treat me like dirt!
then in lesson, we got in trouble off miss, because we weren't working, we were play fighting instead.
miss looked annoyed, as she told us to stop!
so i said "shut up!" she looked at me, and made no fuss, so we carried on, until we just stopped. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 21 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
I'm No Angel.

Contributed by deathdrop on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 02:39:56 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Dull sight,
Comes to me,
As I open my eyes from my sleep,
I’ve over-slept again.
I rub my eyes,
As I look around,
My cuts show,
My broken life has been found.
As it all comes back,
All my thoughts and pain,
I hold my head…
I wish it would go away.
And then I get up,
To face it all again,
To feel the heartache,
That rips at me in its game.
Ok, well school was all right,
At first,
But by the time I’d left my,
Brain had burst.

I went round in this group-
I joined some hard kids,
Because I’m sick of taking it.
And they like me enough,
So we vandalized the toilets,
They set off the fire extinguisher,
They played abit round with the fire alarm,
And I gobbed on the ground,
to try to look hard.
But now I think about it, I know that it was wrong,
It shouldn’t have happened, but it did, the damage is done.
And I’d proberly do it again… because if I don’t, I’m the looser kid.
That people hate, swear at and kick!
We mucked around out the front, where we weren’t meant to go,
Then the head saw us, so we ran…
we broke these rules at lunch, because it’s easy,
We know we can.
Then they play fighted, doing stupid childish slaps,
So I ran up, and pushed into one, it made her look like a prat!
She fell out the door, landed, laughing out-side,
Then loads of people starting staring at us,
looking a me like she could have died.

then when they'd all gone, all but 2,
one of them made me snap.
i felt angry, and used.
i held her up, by her neck,
held up her head, and spoke out, she'd be dead, if she said that again!
she looked all shocked, that i'd answered back, i looked at her smiling, patted her on the back, told her i was joking, even though i weren't, but i hope i got her thinking, she musn't treat me like dirt!
then in lesson, we got in trouble off miss, because we weren't working, we were play fighting instead.
miss looked annoyed, as she told us to stop!
so i said "shut up!" she looked at me, and made no fuss, so we carried on, until we just stopped.




Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-03-09 14:39:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: I'm No Angel. (User Rating: 1 )
by lildrama04 on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 03:28:55 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Why do you feel like this. please tel me know


Re: I'm No Angel. (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 03:47:04 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
good poem , really captures the pressure of school. i dropped out a long time ago and i still remember the hell i was put through.
anyways take care your friend doug


Re: I'm No Angel. (User Rating: 1 )
by SuicidalSon on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 03:55:12 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I thought this was good except for the structure work on that and you'll be awesome


Re: I'm No Angel. (User Rating: 1 )
by karl_wiggins on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 05:44:01 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Deathdrop,

Poetry allows you to eat your shadow. Keep it up, you have talent.,

Karl


Re: I'm No Angel. (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:17:44 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
its ashame how everyone must conform to feel like they fit in somewhere....




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com