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Array ( [sid] => 37550 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i got played. . .. [time] => 2004-03-06 03:06:27 [hometext] => this is just a quick flo' for ya [bodytext] => devotion,
emotions, corrodin',
explodin'
in motion,
we slow down,
so down,
that in least expected time,
we hold this mold,
of what used to be,
what you meant to me,
likeness to be deceived,
relieved,
from this position apon walking away,
a station,
for motavation,
relating to my words,
like you nathan?
or me,
diseased,
relieve me from this pain,
current feelings insane,
i remain prayin,
lyrically savin,
people stuck with my opinions,
my life,
my stealing y'alls hearts,
start to replace,
this chase,
with a simple empty face,
contributing to this race,
and now im stuck,
with my ex as the case,
silently,
insinuatin,
hatred,
in this nations,
corrupted generation,
generatin',
enough negative energy,
to power your car,
but you wont get far,
cause your so,
insensitive,
repeditive,
by creative,
indecency,
it wont be me,
i cried,
but my pride,
wont let me realize,
that the truth was in your eyes,
surprised by the fact,
that i wont look back,
or tread apon the past,
so i can relax,
this mind set,
that your cheatin',
this beating,
i took,
lets look,
at the problems,
we had,
your fakeness of sad,
your religion gone bad,
and my stupidity,
im mad,
oh well,
you put me through hell,
but im not in a cell,
so i figure,
i got my life,
i can still kiss and tell,

dedicated to. .. . . ..
im not gonna say no names you know who you are,

dont play me. .. . . [comments] => 1 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 34 [informant] => nate [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

i got played. . ..

Contributed by nate on Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 03:06:27 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

devotion,
emotions, corrodin',
explodin'
in motion,
we slow down,
so down,
that in least expected time,
we hold this mold,
of what used to be,
what you meant to me,
likeness to be deceived,
relieved,
from this position apon walking away,
a station,
for motavation,
relating to my words,
like you nathan?
or me,
diseased,
relieve me from this pain,
current feelings insane,
i remain prayin,
lyrically savin,
people stuck with my opinions,
my life,
my stealing y'alls hearts,
start to replace,
this chase,
with a simple empty face,
contributing to this race,
and now im stuck,
with my ex as the case,
silently,
insinuatin,
hatred,
in this nations,
corrupted generation,
generatin',
enough negative energy,
to power your car,
but you wont get far,
cause your so,
insensitive,
repeditive,
by creative,
indecency,
it wont be me,
i cried,
but my pride,
wont let me realize,
that the truth was in your eyes,
surprised by the fact,
that i wont look back,
or tread apon the past,
so i can relax,
this mind set,
that your cheatin',
this beating,
i took,
lets look,
at the problems,
we had,
your fakeness of sad,
your religion gone bad,
and my stupidity,
im mad,
oh well,
you put me through hell,
but im not in a cell,
so i figure,
i got my life,
i can still kiss and tell,

dedicated to. .. . . ..
im not gonna say no names you know who you are,

dont play me. .. . .

Copyright © nate ... [ 2004-03-06 03:06:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: i got played. . .. (User Rating: 1 )
by Jessica_Saini on Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 12:54:42 PM AEST
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I know this is just a small thing, but in line 60 you wrote "beating" but in all the other "-ing" words you left the g off and it really stuck out. Other than that, I thought the song was pretty cool:) It would be cool performed as spoken word too.
~Jessica

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