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Array ( [sid] => 37360 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Just Let Me... [time] => 2004-03-04 18:15:22 [hometext] => With thanks to Arden for her help on this.. x_x_x [bodytext] => Let me fall from these visions that insanity brings
Let me murder the crows that fly madly within my mind
Let me have the courage to walk away from this hurt
Let me find strength enough to smudge away the world

Wondering if things will ever change
I stumble to my knees once more
Crying, i beg for someone to care
Yet knowing i'm not worth any of it

Let me scream so loud the voices are deafened
Let me bleed myself dry so i cannot hurt anymore
Let me open my eyes and face, and conquer my fear
Let me freeze this pain and leave it to thaw
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Just Let Me...

Contributed by afraid_of_fear on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:15:22 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Let me fall from these visions that insanity brings
Let me murder the crows that fly madly within my mind
Let me have the courage to walk away from this hurt
Let me find strength enough to smudge away the world

Wondering if things will ever change
I stumble to my knees once more
Crying, i beg for someone to care
Yet knowing i'm not worth any of it

Let me scream so loud the voices are deafened
Let me bleed myself dry so i cannot hurt anymore
Let me open my eyes and face, and conquer my fear
Let me freeze this pain and leave it to thaw

Copyright © afraid_of_fear ... [ 2004-03-04 18:15:22]
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Re: Just Let Me... (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:20:49 PM AEST
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i love it i love it i love it :D
everyone should comment when they read this lol it rocks charlotte!! great job.
your friend
Arden

Re: Just Let Me... (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:36:47 PM AEST
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The form is interesting. I like the last stanza best. The last two lines are wrenching. Love the imagery of freezing and thawing fear.
Nice write.
Stitch

Re: Just Let Me... (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 09:38:03 PM AEST
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Wow... it left me speechless

Peace
Whisper

Re: Just Let Me... (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 10:28:07 PM AEST
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Charlotte,
A brilliant write you've constructed here, so dark and oozing with emotion. Truly a great write.
And many thanks for commenting on my poems.

~Hanna

Re: Just Let Me... (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 03:45:16 PM AEST
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Hey Char i liked this the imagery in this was amazing. I loved it all, but for some reason the first line sticks out the most. Keep up the writing...

Bobo (Joel)

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