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Array ( [sid] => 37212 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Kiss Me [time] => 2004-03-03 18:09:52 [hometext] => About someone abandoned by thier love... [bodytext] => Kiss me
I've been awake for too long
My dreams are bleeding out
Of the seam that spreads from my side
My thoughts have degraded to doubts

I can no longer feel the embrace of you
I can't decipher whats real or what is true

My eyes are going numb
As blood and tears come
From the rift inside of my mind
A link to forgotten times

Shut out
Deny It
Resist
Defy It

Kiss me
My world is caving in
The nightmares have stolen me
I can't make myself function
My lungs refuse to breathe

A red cloud drifts above my head
It tries to drown me with the blood you've shed

My mouth is almost full
I could spit if I'd like
But then you wouldn't taste
Your own alibi

Pretend
Ignore it
Ascend
Desert it

Kiss me
I am a corpse dead from love
Your touch could bring me back
But you no longer care
And you slip out through the cracks [comments] => 4 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 60 [informant] => sicknivesevered [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => insomniac )

Kiss Me

Contributed by sicknivesevered on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 06:09:52 PM in AEST
Topic: insomniac

Kiss me
I've been awake for too long
My dreams are bleeding out
Of the seam that spreads from my side
My thoughts have degraded to doubts

I can no longer feel the embrace of you
I can't decipher whats real or what is true

My eyes are going numb
As blood and tears come
From the rift inside of my mind
A link to forgotten times

Shut out
Deny It
Resist
Defy It

Kiss me
My world is caving in
The nightmares have stolen me
I can't make myself function
My lungs refuse to breathe

A red cloud drifts above my head
It tries to drown me with the blood you've shed

My mouth is almost full
I could spit if I'd like
But then you wouldn't taste
Your own alibi

Pretend
Ignore it
Ascend
Desert it

Kiss me
I am a corpse dead from love
Your touch could bring me back
But you no longer care
And you slip out through the cracks

Copyright © sicknivesevered ... [ 2004-03-03 18:09:52]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Kiss Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 06:38:43 PM AEST
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wow, that was moving. I love this.

Re: Kiss Me (User Rating: 1 )
by LornyaNarFuinenya on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 06:52:30 PM AEST
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aww that was sad and touching great write!!!

Re: Kiss Me (User Rating: 1 )
by gery_giggles on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 09:04:41 PM AEST
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i liked...its dark and so sad.....good write!
luv always

Re: Kiss Me (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:11:18 PM AEST
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wow.. amazing.. so very sad, but a most beautiful poem..
charlotte x_x_x

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