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Array ( [sid] => 36912 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => NO MORE!!! [time] => 2004-03-01 12:09:05 [hometext] => I wrote this a little after the love of my life killed his self!! plz tell me what you think! [bodytext] =>


Cant hear your cry’s any longer

Its like they got farther and farther away till they vanished

I want to see your face once more

No i need to see your face once more

I cant take it anymore

The nightmares have to stop

The day dreams end here

Because you are making me crazy

I think about you day and night

and in between ...

But i cant help it your

Smile

Laugh

Eyes

NO!! Here i go again

i cant do this to my self

i just cant

you cant do this to me

this is the end for good now

the end...

Yea thats it the end.. Its over

but the day you put that gun to your head it was over

now that i think about it

you are to blame

or is it me

not being there sooner

i should of listen to my heart

not you

you said you are fine

you would call me later

i never go that call

how i long for that call

just your voice for one moment

thast all i need

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 6 [informant] => angelface [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
NO MORE!!!

Contributed by angelface on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 12:09:05 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry






Cant hear your cry’s any longer

Its like they got farther and farther away till they vanished

I want to see your face once more

No i need to see your face once more

I cant take it anymore

The nightmares have to stop

The day dreams end here

Because you are making me crazy

I think about you day and night

and in between ...

But i cant help it your

Smile

Laugh

Eyes

NO!! Here i go again

i cant do this to my self

i just cant

you cant do this to me

this is the end for good now

the end...

Yea thats it the end.. Its over

but the day you put that gun to your head it was over

now that i think about it

you are to blame

or is it me

not being there sooner

i should of listen to my heart

not you

you said you are fine

you would call me later

i never go that call

how i long for that call

just your voice for one moment

thast all i need





Copyright © angelface ... [ 2004-03-01 12:09:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: NO MORE!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 12:47:21 PM AEST
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not bad not bad, theres a few typos but no biggie we all have those. i liked this really good i look forward to more.
Arden


Re: NO MORE!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 01:57:07 PM AEST
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The depth of feeling was all I saw...the pain, you made me feel it myself...really good job. I just sold a piece of work for someone whose husband killed himself a year ago...it was a very hard poem to write..trying to put myself in her place and feel what she feels...I hope your heart heals soon...


Re: NO MORE!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 03:54:52 PM AEST
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ive been on both sides of the coin . ive seen my uncle kill himself and i almost suceeded in killing myself. its not your fault , ill say that,
though i know it does little or nothing to heal your pain. i hope the dreams of him stop haunting you so you can finally feel happiness again. i can never understand your pain because each person experiances a unique version of pain. however my experiance gives me a little understanding. i sincerely hope that youcan leave this behindyou and find happiness. your friend doug


Re: NO MORE!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by uchendu on Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 12:19:11 PM AEST
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Sweet good write-up friend... you have a unique style i admire and this is a winner any day.. get on doing it friend




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